Grandmother of Groom

GRANDMOTHER OF GROOM

the oil of gladness
spilled suddenly on Sunday -
heart in cellophane

8/31/2017
Senryu of Sadness
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Callus Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 3:02 AM
Oh this sure is floating in sadness, Kim! Congrats on your podium finish! Regards // paul
Rodrigues Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 8:03 AM
Thanks, Paul.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 10:58 PM
Congratulations on your win, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 8:03 AM
Thanks, Subimal!
Pett Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 5:36 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Kim. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 6:09 PM
Thanks, Roy!
Andresen Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 11:56 AM
- Congratulations on your great second place in the contest, Kim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 1:14 PM
Thanks, Anne-Lise xx
Sands Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 11:54 AM
Congratulations Kim :)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 1:14 PM
Thanks, Heidi!
Trifiatis Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 8:23 AM
Your loss dear, Kim is heaven's gain! My condolences!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 9:11 AM
For sure! Thanks. Our loved ones wait for us on the other side - in Paradise!
Pandit Avatar
August 31, 2017 at 8:00 PM
This captures grief!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 31, 2017 at 8:02 PM
Thanks, Vijay!
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