Grandma Phoned

I have loved him since I was young.
Through every cloud, he rose the sun.
His work was honest – one-on-one with land.
I loved this farmer and his callused hands!
Safe, strong arms would lift me to sit upon his tractor.
Picture boy and Grandpa - no memory could be happier.

Today, I took the inherited watch from my mantle.
Now the cherished timepiece accompanies my flight,
perhaps lending faith to my emotional plight.
Precious ticking in my pocket comforts my destination;
brings forth his presence and I will not try to stop it
for the watch soothes my driving desperation.

Steering, my feelings begin actively conceiving 
wings in golden display soaring my car this day
thru prayer-filled air to timely see me there.
So many endless miles of thunder under my wheels.
Thoughts ever somber tumble various appeals.
I gasp down feelings he may leave before I show.
He stays in my heart’s eye while I consume highway
on burning, dedicated tires determined to fly
'cause Grandma phoned to say, Grandpa would soon die.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Marcum Wong Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 1:19 AM
This beautiful tribute to your grandfather brought me to tears CayCay. I hope you arrived in time. So moving! #7 ; )
Dietrich Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 7:07 PM
by the way, was it true? I had a grandpa farmer who had a tractor as well. he died of a heart attack and I was just a teenager.
Godwin Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 4:45 PM
Oh, the watch part is also true - I handed it to him on his way out. I misspoke below, he had not died yet - he did hang on until my son's Dad arrived ... CayCay
Godwin Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 4:41 PM
Thank you for the lovely feedback. It is true, but not for me, for Kyle's Dad. His grandfather died while we were married and I wrote this when he took off in the car from Texas to Kansas. Talk to you more later ... CayCay
Dietrich Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 7:05 PM
wow, this one is amazing, the feeling behind it. Got to the last line and just loved that ending. this was your second best. I like it better than your first best! I see it also got third place in a contest. Belated congrats. Was glad to finally find a nice one like this I had not seen already.
Tor Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 10:56 PM
CayCay nice win!!
Godwin Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 12:58 AM
Hey, Michael - thank you so much ... CayCay
A  Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 10:24 PM
Hi CayCay, congrats on your wonderful win. Love SKAT
A. Sharma Avatar
September 26, 2015 at 2:07 AM
Wonderful write caycay! Congrats on great win
Godwin Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 5:54 PM
Hey, you are so sweet to come by as you do, always upbeat and very kind ... CayCay
Y. Avatar
September 25, 2015 at 9:42 PM
CayCay, you have penned heartfelt piece to you grandpa. Congratulations on your heartfelt win:-) Alexis
Godwin Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 5:53 PM
Hi, Alexis - thank you for taking the time to write me, very sweet ... CayCay
Woods    Avatar
September 25, 2015 at 1:29 PM
Popping back to say CONGRATS!! : )
Godwin Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 5:53 PM
Thank you, my friend ... CayCay
Haight Avatar
September 25, 2015 at 10:33 AM
Such a sentimental and emotional tribute to your dear grandpa, CayCay. Your words are do touching. Congratulations on your fine win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Godwin Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 5:52 PM
There's the sweet Sandra face - thank you for your kind and meaningful words ... CayCay
Roper Avatar
September 25, 2015 at 10:03 AM
CayCay, Congratulations on your Win!!!
Godwin Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 5:51 PM
Thank you, Eve ... CayCay
Nance Avatar
September 25, 2015 at 6:45 AM
aww...very touching write sweetie, hugs...grats on your win
Godwin Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 5:51 PM
Thank you, Casarah - I appreciate you dropping by ... CayCay
Lindley Avatar
September 21, 2015 at 9:59 PM
This poem struck me deeply as I remember my grandfather and his passing so long ago. Super 7 on this gem and adding this to my fav list. Thanks
Godwin Avatar
September 24, 2015 at 11:01 AM
I don't know that I've ever made anyone's fav list, such a good feeling to have done so. Thank you so much, Robert, for telling me ... CayCay
Flannery Avatar
September 19, 2015 at 12:48 PM
Such a good man! Oh how our loved ones so do touch our spirit and always remain within us. One would be surprised how often they are there within speaking distance day upon day. Still protecting us as they always did but now as they now look upon the Glory of God. Such a wonderful Gift to have an Angel like that!
Godwin Avatar
September 24, 2015 at 10:59 AM
I am so glad you shared your touching words with me. Thank you, Vincent for reading and commenting in such a heart-felt way ... CayCay
Inman Avatar
September 18, 2015 at 9:22 AM
Touching CayCay.
Godwin Avatar
September 18, 2015 at 12:07 PM
I thank you for sharing your reaction with me. As you know, hearing from people means a great deal to all of us ... CayCay
Woods    Avatar
September 17, 2015 at 9:48 PM
: ( Didn't like the end, but not every poem can have a happy ending. I can feel this poem and I can picture the bloody minded intention to get to him as quickly as possible.
Godwin Avatar
September 18, 2015 at 12:06 PM
Thank you, Mark, for going on the ride with me. I could ask no more ... CayCay
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