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Grandma Phoned

Dedicated to My Miracle's Father, with Love
I have loved him since I was young. Through every cloud, he rose the sun. His work was honest – one-on-one with land. I loved this farmer and his callused hands! Safe, strong arms would lift me to sit upon his tractor. Picture boy and Grandpa - no memory could be happier. Today, I took the inherited watch from my mantle. Now the cherished timepiece accompanies my flight, perhaps lending faith to my emotional plight. Precious ticking in my pocket comforts my destination; brings forth his presence and I will not try to stop it for the watch soothes my driving desperation. Steering, my feelings begin actively conceiving wings in golden display soaring my car this day thru prayer-filled air to timely see me there. So many endless miles of thunder under my wheels. Thoughts ever somber tumble various appeals. I gasp down feelings he may leave before I show. He stays in my heart’s eye while I consume highway on burning, dedicated tires determined to fly 'cause Grandma phoned to say, Grandpa would soon die. ... CayCay Jennings 9-17-15 / 1988?

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Date: 5/28/2016 1:19:00 AM
This beautiful tribute to your grandfather brought me to tears CayCay. I hope you arrived in time. So moving! #7 ; )
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Date: 1/2/2016 7:07:00 PM
by the way, was it true? I had a grandpa farmer who had a tractor as well. he died of a heart attack and I was just a teenager.
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 1/3/2016 4:45:00 PM
Oh, the watch part is also true - I handed it to him on his way out. I misspoke below, he had not died yet - he did hang on until my son's Dad arrived ... CayCay
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 1/3/2016 4:41:00 PM
Thank you for the lovely feedback. It is true, but not for me, for Kyle's Dad. His grandfather died while we were married and I wrote this when he took off in the car from Texas to Kansas. Talk to you more later ... CayCay
Date: 1/2/2016 7:05:00 PM
wow, this one is amazing, the feeling behind it. Got to the last line and just loved that ending. this was your second best. I like it better than your first best! I see it also got third place in a contest. Belated congrats. Was glad to finally find a nice one like this I had not seen already.
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Date: 9/28/2015 10:56:00 PM
CayCay nice win!!
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 10/1/2015 12:58:00 AM
Hey, Michael - thank you so much ... CayCay
Date: 9/28/2015 10:24:00 PM
Hi CayCay, congrats on your wonderful win. Love SKAT
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Date: 9/26/2015 2:07:00 AM
Wonderful write caycay! Congrats on great win
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 9/28/2015 5:54:00 PM
Hey, you are so sweet to come by as you do, always upbeat and very kind ... CayCay
Date: 9/25/2015 9:42:00 PM
CayCay, you have penned heartfelt piece to you grandpa. Congratulations on your heartfelt win:-) Alexis
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 9/28/2015 5:53:00 PM
Hi, Alexis - thank you for taking the time to write me, very sweet ... CayCay
Date: 9/25/2015 1:29:00 PM
Popping back to say CONGRATS!! : )
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 9/28/2015 5:53:00 PM
Thank you, my friend ... CayCay
Date: 9/25/2015 10:33:00 AM
Such a sentimental and emotional tribute to your dear grandpa, CayCay. Your words are do touching. Congratulations on your fine win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 9/28/2015 5:52:00 PM
There's the sweet Sandra face - thank you for your kind and meaningful words ... CayCay
Date: 9/25/2015 10:03:00 AM
CayCay, Congratulations on your Win!!!
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 9/28/2015 5:51:00 PM
Thank you, Eve ... CayCay
Date: 9/25/2015 6:45:00 AM
aww...very touching write sweetie, hugs...grats on your win
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 9/28/2015 5:51:00 PM
Thank you, Casarah - I appreciate you dropping by ... CayCay
Date: 9/21/2015 9:59:00 PM
This poem struck me deeply as I remember my grandfather and his passing so long ago. Super 7 on this gem and adding this to my fav list. Thanks
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 9/24/2015 11:01:00 AM
I don't know that I've ever made anyone's fav list, such a good feeling to have done so. Thank you so much, Robert, for telling me ... CayCay
Date: 9/19/2015 12:48:00 PM
Such a good man! Oh how our loved ones so do touch our spirit and always remain within us. One would be surprised how often they are there within speaking distance day upon day. Still protecting us as they always did but now as they now look upon the Glory of God. Such a wonderful Gift to have an Angel like that!
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 9/24/2015 10:59:00 AM
I am so glad you shared your touching words with me. Thank you, Vincent for reading and commenting in such a heart-felt way ... CayCay
Date: 9/18/2015 9:22:00 AM
Touching CayCay.
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 9/18/2015 12:07:00 PM
I thank you for sharing your reaction with me. As you know, hearing from people means a great deal to all of us ... CayCay
Date: 9/17/2015 9:48:00 PM
: ( Didn't like the end, but not every poem can have a happy ending. I can feel this poem and I can picture the bloody minded intention to get to him as quickly as possible.
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 9/18/2015 12:06:00 PM
Thank you, Mark, for going on the ride with me. I could ask no more ... CayCay

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