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Grandfather Clock

GRANDFATHER CLOCK

christmas eve
old hall clock chimes twelve
this silent rush

holidaysenryu

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Joe Maverick

December 29, 2011 at 1:41 AM

Well and simply put Daver,, (good to read)

Daver Austin

December 29, 2011 at 1:37 PM

If anything describes me, Joe, it is simple. Hardy harr harr. Love, daver

December 27, 2011 at 12:55 PM

You captured the feeling so well in this one. I hope you had a wonderful Christmas. Thank you for your kind comment. Happy New Year! Karen

Robert A. Dufresne

December 11, 2011 at 6:25 AM

"This silent rush "...cool. nice job of it Daver..... have a blessed holy day season

Andrea Dietrich

December 8, 2011 at 11:47 PM

I love how you did this, DAver. I saw it at PFT and just knew I could see it here and tell you that.

Harry Horsman

December 8, 2011 at 8:49 AM

enjoyed this Daver, harry

M. Hussain Effendi

December 8, 2011 at 8:42 AM

A real sweet write, sir. Thank you for sharing

Elizabeth Wesley

December 7, 2011 at 8:30 PM

Love this Daver, the chime keep us in tune with the time. Mine won't work; it just sits there and frowns.

Tony Lane

December 7, 2011 at 3:00 PM

Merry Christmas Daver

Jack Horne

December 7, 2011 at 2:58 PM

I just love this one, Daver. My mother has a grandfather clock and this great write really fast-forwarded me to Xmas Eve already. I can't tell you how festive I'm feeling at this moment, LOL

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