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Grandchild of Mine

His eyes and heart fill with angst of growing old, going to pre-school The thought of learning excites him so, he sharpens up his manners Spills his chocolate soy milk and finger paints me a new brown house Copyright © 2011 By Caryl S. Muzzey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/29/2011 12:46:00 PM
A cute and heartwarming write Caryl. Wishing you all the best with this gem. I really enjoyed it tonight.. ;)
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Date: 3/28/2011 9:57:00 PM
oh my goodness. this has got to be THE sweetest of all the sijo i have seen in this particular contest. I predict a big win!
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Date: 3/28/2011 8:10:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning Caryl. The best to you in the contest. May you have a beautiful week of good health, love and baskets overflowing with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/27/2011 6:10:00 PM
Pleasant feelings for the grandkid, Caryl
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Date: 3/27/2011 1:51:00 PM
Excellent one filled with feelings..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Sara
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Date: 3/27/2011 1:49:00 PM
Your grandson sounds adorable, Caryl. It's great that he is excited about learning. That desire tends to wear off as children get older. Such a cute poem! Wishing you success in Adeleke's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/27/2011 1:26:00 PM
oh, this is sooo cure and playful, caryl... no grandchild yet but my grand nephews and nieces do the same... stellar! nesy winning wishes! :) huggs, nette
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