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Grandad's Missing

There's a void, now Where once a steadfast heart beat time The soul in perfect harmony with life's uncertain pulse With those who clambered eagerly in solace or in joy To scale that mighty pinnacle The Rock, within the bosom of the family There's a void, now But marvel at the structure, the firmness of the ground beneath The strata richly layered with wisdom of generations past A fault free seam constructing firm foundations Binding those within the bosom of the family There's a void, now A hollow cavern echoing the anger and the pain Trust time; it has no fear of finite elements The source of unremitting pain Within the bosom of the family There's a void, now So fill the emptiness and catalogue the memories Harvesting the richness of their meaning The fullness of the seed sown long ago To bloom forever within the bosom of the family

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 5/27/2012 11:16:00 AM
Carol, being a grandfather myself, this thought often goes through my head, what will it be like when I am gone??, I love your refrain and I notice you like using a refrain in your work..well done..David
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Date: 8/25/2011 3:50:00 PM
I love your line, "the Rock, within the bosom of the family"..that says so much and is so descriptive a beautiful write, thank you so much
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Date: 11/12/2010 11:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Carol. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/8/2010 10:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week Carol. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/3/2010 5:40:00 AM
It is very painful to have close family member to go on to their great reward but we know that they have gained at our loss..Great write in honor of one that you loved dearly...(If you don't give them a title, people can't read them..)..Sara
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Date: 4/19/2009 12:19:00 AM
what a wonderful tribute. very nice indeed
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