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Grand Park

Park’s stoic oak, its bark with deep fissures. Soft serenade of brook and waterfall With copper coins and stones of well-wishers. Wee critters in and out of mossy wall. The warm and cold, four seasons, do enthrall: Grass plush, leaves deep, snow depths. The stellar sun Shines on a sticky web, intricate-spun. Quick flap of wings and landing of birdsong. Sighting a doe, with young - skittish, on run. Grand park, in shadow’s leap - a lavish throng. 10/31/2022 Dizain Poetry Contest Sponsor: Sotto Poet Theme: Nature

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Date: 11/9/2022 11:25:00 AM
Love how you did this one, Kim. BIG congrats to you
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/9/2022 1:47:00 PM
Thank you, sweet friend!
Date: 11/6/2022 7:35:00 AM
Wonderful poem, congratulations.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/7/2022 5:28:00 PM
Thank you, Terry!
Date: 11/6/2022 5:16:00 AM
Wow! Such a great work! Congratulations!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/7/2022 5:28:00 PM
Thank you very much, Christuraj!
Date: 11/6/2022 3:57:00 AM
Creative winning work on Lasaad's winners' list. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/7/2022 5:28:00 PM
I appreciate that, Sara! Thank you!
Date: 11/5/2022 6:42:00 PM
Kim, this Dizain form poem is beautiful, the parks are lovely at this time of year, the trees in their autumnal colours never cease to please. Congratulations on your win in Sotto’s contest… Belle
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/7/2022 5:27:00 PM
Thank you, sweet friend!
Date: 11/5/2022 8:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful context win, Kim. You have composed such an excellent poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/5/2022 6:17:00 PM
Thank you for my placement in your contest! :)
Date: 11/2/2022 1:53:00 PM
This is very nice, Kim. I wish you much success in the contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/3/2022 7:39:00 AM
Not as easy for me to write about nature. This took a while to write. The dizain a much harder rhyme pattern then some along with theme. Thank you for your encouragement, Milton!

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