Grand Park

Park’s stoic oak, its bark with deep fissures. Soft serenade of brook and waterfall With copper coins and stones of well-wishers. Wee critters in and out of mossy wall. The warm and cold, four seasons, do enthrall: Grass plush, leaves deep, snow depths. The stellar sun Shines on a sticky web, intricate-spun. Quick flap of wings and landing of birdsong. Sighting a doe, with young - skittish, on run. Grand park, in shadow’s leap - a lavish throng. 10/31/2022 Dizain Poetry Contest Sponsor: Sotto Poet Theme: Nature
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Dietrich Avatar
November 9, 2022 at 11:25 AM
Love how you did this one, Kim. BIG congrats to you
Rodrigues Avatar
November 9, 2022 at 1:47 PM
Thank you, sweet friend!
Miller Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 7:35 AM
Wonderful poem, congratulations.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 7, 2022 at 5:28 PM
Thank you, Terry!
Alex Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 5:16 AM
Wow! Such a great work! Congratulations!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 7, 2022 at 5:28 PM
Thank you very much, Christuraj!
Kendrick Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 3:57 AM
Creative winning work on Lasaad's winners' list. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
November 7, 2022 at 5:28 PM
I appreciate that, Sara! Thank you!
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November 5, 2022 at 6:42 PM
Kim, this Dizain form poem is beautiful, the parks are lovely at this time of year, the trees in their autumnal colours never cease to please. Congratulations on your win in Sotto’s contest… Belle
Rodrigues Avatar
November 7, 2022 at 5:27 PM
Thank you, sweet friend!
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November 5, 2022 at 8:30 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful context win, Kim. You have composed such an excellent poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 5, 2022 at 6:17 PM
Thank you for my placement in your contest! :)
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November 2, 2022 at 1:53 PM
This is very nice, Kim. I wish you much success in the contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 3, 2022 at 7:39 AM
Not as easy for me to write about nature. This took a while to write. The dizain a much harder rhyme pattern then some along with theme. Thank you for your encouragement, Milton!
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