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Gramp

Gramp died on may 14, it was the sadiest day, I never want to repeat, we went to his fournel, and we went to his grave, but when we looked inside, we couldn't believe he really died, But as time went by, things weren't the same, because gramp wasn't around, to make are lifes complete, now nans alone, in that big empty house, with no husband to come home to, when she's feeling so alone.

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Date: 4/18/2010 2:06:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. enjoyed reading your creative write..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/17/2010 4:20:00 PM
thank you
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Date: 4/17/2010 4:00:00 PM
sorry for your loss you both still have each other to help heal the pain stay strong and I hope your hearts will mend welcome to poetry soup faleshia
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Date: 4/17/2010 3:37:00 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Candy. If you would like to have more of your poetry read please limit your postings to 3-5 poems per day. In doing this more of your poetry is read and other poets can also have theirs read. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. I am so sorry to hear of your loss. Writing helps. Love, Carol
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