Grains of Wet Whimsy

grains of wet whimsy
collapse in cascades of froth...
summer memories
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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December 24, 2010 at 7:32 PM
HelloGerard, how are you stoping by to enjoy your poem and wish you a happy x- mass and a wonderful new year,..p.d.
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December 20, 2010 at 8:47 AM
Yes so true are your lines and in parallel to the football season .. u are correct.. the debacle was awful to the eyes and stunned was every fan in my home and all around town... they are still a Wild Card but if they mess up Coughlin will be gone .. ESPN said as much today... Cower back in the coaching race too... Miami, Houston, Giants.. I am picking the Falcons.. the Jets are good at times.. but... who do u like in S.B. luv..??
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December 12, 2010 at 3:50 AM
Good one that says so much in three short lines..The metaphors are great..Your kind comments on my work made my morning lighter..Sara
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December 11, 2010 at 6:43 PM
Yep for sure summer is gone Gerard. Nice Haiku, and good luck if for a contest. Thanks so much for your graceful comment on my work.
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December 11, 2010 at 6:05 PM
ohhhhh this is yummy! I mean so viseral just like a haiku should be I can smell the sea and taste the salt! (One heck of a flattering comment you left for me, kind sir!) Light & Love from the Mutual Admiration Society
Kendrick Avatar
December 7, 2010 at 3:27 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest..Sara
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December 7, 2010 at 6:01 AM
Congratulations on your win Gerard in S K A T*s "Sandcastle Haiku"contest. Love,Carol
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December 6, 2010 at 10:09 PM
Congratuations, Gerard, this one I would have given better than an hm! Luv, Andrea
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December 6, 2010 at 8:56 PM
Congratulations Gerard on this well deserved HM win.
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December 6, 2010 at 3:48 PM
Congrats Gerard my friend on your HM in Irma's contest with this rare beauty entry luv... enjoy a special honor and victory tonight with luv.. so who u got tonight PATS or JETS....???
Freeman Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 8:39 AM
Congratulations Gerard on your success with this worthy poem. Agape. Moses
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December 6, 2010 at 2:26 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved Hm win in the contest of skat, gerard
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December 5, 2010 at 9:46 PM
GERARD~CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR HM! And a super thank for the nice & amazing entry. I had so much fun pretending to ride out every haiku. Many of the haiku's had more meaning to them than I expected. God bless*luv~SKAT
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December 3, 2010 at 8:29 AM
Wonderful images you have penned so well, Gerard
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December 3, 2010 at 8:28 AM
oh how sweet Gerard.. how sad also.. luv your perfect title for this contest..good luck my friend.. well the game last night did NOT go my way but still some games left to play and hope my GIANTS rise to the call and overpower those boo birds...luv.. happy football watching and happy weekend my friend.. with luv..
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December 3, 2010 at 8:15 AM
Can't help but think of the fun last summer at the water park while reading this haiku, Gerard. Now that winter is here, we'll only see flakes of frozen whimsey. A memorable haiku, my talented friend. Love and blessings, Carolyn
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December 2, 2010 at 8:18 PM
wow, this is just awesome, Gerard. I sure love summers!!!
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