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Grains of Sand

As we sift through the grains of sand Falling from the hourglass, Like time, it slips through our hands As through its eternal realm we pass Time measures our joy, our sorrow And knows when the bells of fate do chime, When it does, we can neither beg nor borrow To turn back the hands of time If only we could go back to that year To change events which took loved ones in their prime The 'what ifs' dissolve into tears, If only we could turn back the hands of time Many summers have come and gone Since last we saw them smile, But who can hold back the dawn Or banish the morning dew in exile 10-7-19 If Only We Could Turn Back the Hands of Time Contest Sponsor: Silent One

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Date: 12/2/2019 4:49:00 PM
Hello Joseph ... we all reach many crossroads in our life, and in hindsight, we know that at times we took the wrong road. So much truth in your poem Joseph - Lindsay
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Joseph May
Date: 12/2/2019 9:56:00 PM
Thank you Lindsay
Date: 10/16/2019 1:34:00 AM
Love this, Joseph, especially the last two lines ~ though I have tried... Congratulations on your placement in the contest!
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Joseph May
Date: 12/2/2019 9:56:00 PM
Thank you HT
Date: 10/15/2019 9:47:00 AM
My friend a pleasure to read this superbly crafted, exceptionally smooth, fine rhyming and well-flowing piece. Especially loved the two closing verses! Congratulations on your win in this contest.
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Joseph May
Date: 12/2/2019 9:55:00 PM
Thank you Robert
Date: 10/15/2019 2:55:00 AM
Congrats to you and blessings, Love, Gina
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Joseph May
Date: 12/2/2019 9:55:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 10/14/2019 2:31:00 PM
Back with congrats Joseph, on your well deserved win.
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Joseph May
Date: 12/2/2019 9:55:00 PM
Thank you Vijay
Date: 10/14/2019 12:25:00 PM
time measures our joy, our sorrow.... great line.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Joseph May
Date: 12/2/2019 9:54:00 PM
Thank you Silent
Date: 10/11/2019 10:03:00 AM
Wonderful poetry, love the theme, the rhyme and flow.
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Joseph May
Date: 12/2/2019 9:54:00 PM
Thank you Harry
Date: 10/10/2019 3:31:00 PM
Unfortunately we cannot turn back the hands of time, thank God for the memories that push us forward every day into a promised land, enjoyed your poem dear Joseph, hope all is well, sending you a big hug.
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Joseph May
Date: 10/10/2019 11:01:00 PM
So true Vie, Sending you a big hug right back :)
Date: 10/8/2019 12:44:00 PM
Hi Joseph, another lovely poem, know we cant' turn back the hands of time, but I believe we can try and not have regrets - however, we all feel remorse at times and wish we could have said we are sorry. However, happy moments are locked into our memory and we can rewind anytime - an absolute fav. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Joseph May
Date: 10/10/2019 10:59:00 PM
Thank you Jennifer and thanks for making it a fave..hugs and blessings
Date: 10/7/2019 8:53:00 PM
Perhaps it's best that we can't turn back the hands of time. Sometimes changing things, isn't the right thing to do. Just my simple thinking. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. ~ Brandy
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Joseph May
Date: 10/8/2019 7:04:00 AM
Thank you Brandy
Date: 10/7/2019 8:33:00 PM
This is a beauty. I love it and wish you big wins... I love the rhymes, too. Love and prayers for you, Gina
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Joseph May
Date: 10/8/2019 7:03:00 AM
Thank you Regina..
Date: 10/7/2019 4:41:00 PM
Great rhymes Joseph..lovely tone and flow ..the ending lines are superb..a winner for sure.
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Joseph May
Date: 10/7/2019 7:28:00 PM
Thank you Vijay..
Date: 10/7/2019 1:39:00 PM
"If only we could go back to that year To change events which took loved ones in their prime" - if we could, yes if we could, oh, if we could!
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Joseph May
Date: 10/7/2019 1:44:00 PM
Aah yes, if only we could, Thank you for your comments Caren..

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