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Haiku #12,024-12,028 I welcome winter with virgin clean fields of white crisp air, well dressed nights Spring's voice too, will sing with nature's scent wakening be done spring cleaning Summer will slip in my shoulders bare as I jog through drizzle's warm breeze Fall makes a comeback I am awed by the clearing a year laced with zing. *

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Date: 1/23/2015 12:47:00 PM
- Haiku for the whole year - Love all four! - Spring and summer are my fav. :) - Well done, Iris! - // Anne-Lise :)
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Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 1/23/2015 12:54:00 PM
That's interesting observation, Anne-Lise. "Haiku for the whole year" thanks my friend, right back to yours, inspiring.
Date: 1/23/2015 11:20:00 AM
Ka Chukwu gozie unu!Mi love Bileez Am I correct in expression Iris
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Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 1/23/2015 1:01:00 PM
Rajat, my friend, Unu means youall. Mi means my. Belize not Bileez. But you have made an effort with Belize Creole, and that's most interesting.
Date: 1/23/2015 11:02:00 AM
OOO what awfully good haiku.Loved them Iris my dear. God bless.Your friend Rajat
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Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 1/23/2015 1:15:00 PM
OOO what kind comment * How awfully inspiring * Have a pleasant day. namaste!
Date: 1/22/2015 5:49:00 PM
Love the haiku -- the circle of life!! I think I saw you jogging in the park!! 7
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Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 1/23/2015 1:24:00 PM
"The circle of life!!" * New moments, and new chances * How do we partake?* Thank you, my good friend, right back to yours.

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