Nette Onclaud Poet Rhyme

Graceful the Pose

How graceful the swan’s pose that circles a quay 
Her elegant plumes flitting away, 
To dance as night-tide approaches 
When furled gait twitches, 
In a  bold
Pose!
Stars behold
This charm like a rose,
As waltzes on tides enclose
The bloomed poses of her last display.
How graceful the swan’s pose that circles a quay.

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser February 26, 2015 at 9:30 AM as always Nette graceful are your words.. :)! Etheree it is.. :)! wee how are you?//olive eloisa

Ralph Sergi February 25, 2015 at 12:18 PM You have such a way with poetic words. A beautiful Etheree.

Robert Lindley February 22, 2015 at 6:47 AM A7 on this display of fantastic talent my friend. You rock!

James Peranteau February 19, 2015 at 6:10 AM I think this is becoming the next new form dear poet....and you should have this one in the bag ! Nice write Nette ! have a blessed day my friend.much love, james

Leon Datu February 18, 2015 at 1:39 PM Wow, I have it in me to watch this beauty all day. Perfect poem from an illustrious poet!

Ralph Sergi February 18, 2015 at 12:44 PM I can visualize the swan gliding in the quay. beautifully done ,bette! It sounds like a winner!

Monterey Sirak February 18, 2015 at 8:30 AM Beautiful. Your words are so graceful, they mimic the swan gliding across the water.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders February 17, 2015 at 9:04 PM Lovely imagery, Nette! My mother-in-law loves swans...I have to share this with her...hugs, Rhonda

Jan Allison February 17, 2015 at 10:45 AM a poem as graceful as the swan - good luck in the contest Nette:-) Hugs Jan xx

Daver Austin February 17, 2015 at 10:00 AM That graceful pose - does the swan know how beautiful she is. Luck in the contest. Love, daver

Poesy Relish February 17, 2015 at 9:24 AM such a graceful pen Nette.. loved it.. a 7 from me.. the beauty of the scene is captured to the minute detail... lov n hugs,nad