Graceful

Graceful like tree
seeds gather blackbirds
qi gong on green lawn
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Dietrich Avatar
June 22, 2017 at 7:57 PM
ooh, I love the way you turn it around and say that the seeds are gathering the blackbirds. SO cool.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 11:06 AM
Very meditative and gentle flowing haiku, Phil. Your impressive knowledge of a variety of subjects always shines thru in your poetry. An spiritual exercise in poetic movement. Love always, brother.
Capitano Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 2:36 PM
Thanks man, always good to hear from you...I've been out of the loop for a bit. Peddling the book.
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