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Grace of Life

Written: October 21, 2023 For Brian Strand Contest _____________________________ So true feel blue So scary To marry A fool to school Fall shrubs In tubs Falsehood Had stood Selfish sell fish Ethics Skeptics Psycho My foe Spell cast fell fast

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Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/22/2023 6:02:00 AM

Meaningful pairs of poetic lines, my friend. A winning poem, as always.

Silent One

Date: 10/22/2023 3:34:00 AM

You did these really well Sotto... nice arrangement of words.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/21/2023 9:50:00 PM

Woahh, what an astoundingly creative poem this is!! I'm loving your ingenious vocabulary, word weaving and phenomenal flow here.. Absolutely captivates the readers attention and you've conveyed the depth in a very powerful way! Reflecting all the negatives of an ambience, with striking thoughts.. You've delivered that in a very ingenious manner.. "Falsehood Had stood", "Ethics skeptics" Amazingly done, goes well with the spooky season..