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crisp, clean, lined, pages parallel universes waiting to be born 4/27/2019

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Juliet Ligon

Date: 10/5/2019 10:35:00 PM

I'm not usually a fan of Haiku, but this I love! Adding to favs.

P.S. Awtry
Date: 10/6/2019 8:07:00 AM

Thank you. This is one of those that sort of landed on me. I like it, too :) ~ps

Alkas Poetry

Date: 5/18/2019 11:53:00 PM

This means creation ... take your pen and write poet, create worlds! Good words, congrats alkas

P.S. Awtry
Date: 5/19/2019 1:03:00 AM

Thank you very much. :) -ps

Jack Horne

Date: 5/12/2019 12:55:00 PM

oh, i love this

P.S. Awtry
Date: 5/19/2019 1:02:00 AM

Thank you Jack :) -ps

Charles Messina

Date: 4/29/2019 4:54:00 AM

Nice Haiku P.S., I think you may have a point when you said "writing may be seasonal" lol We all have busy lives and I myself find myself too busy to write and read as much as I'd like too. Welcome back dear friend. Hugs Charlie

P.S. Awtry
Date: 4/29/2019 8:24:00 AM

Thank you Charlie, for your kind words and encouragement :). -ps

Jan Allison

Date: 4/28/2019 4:33:00 PM

thanks for sharing your thoughts PS, shame my pen is somewhat constipated at the moment think my muse is in a parallel universe at the moment:-( hugs Jan xx

P.S. Awtry
Date: 4/28/2019 4:42:00 PM

The "queen of poo" constipated? ;) It seems that writer's ailment is going around. I wonder if it's seasonal... Maybe the cozy feel of autumn and winter are better for writing??? I am writing out of sheer willpower having not written anything in over a month. Well, I hope your muse wakes up! Thank you for dropping by :) ~ps

Rico Leffanta

Date: 4/28/2019 4:29:00 PM

Well done! Aloha! Rico

P.S. Awtry
Date: 4/28/2019 4:43:00 PM

Aloha Rico! Thank you very much :) ~ps

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/28/2019 1:26:00 PM

You've hit the jackpot (with me) with this one! ... Love the idea of parallel universes, and somehow I sense that they exist. Can't prove it yet, of course; but I think it will be proven someday. (At any rate, I read Scientific American cover-to-cover and have become a physics/science nut in my old age. Thanks for this great haiku! :) gw

P.S. Awtry
Date: 4/28/2019 3:33:00 PM

I am so glad you liked it and always appreciate your comments :) ~ps