Grab a Friend and Go To the Show

So excited to see the show

Therefore grab a friend and go 

We see only good music and fun

Not the entire run

We dance and sing

Drink and binge 

With friends we are 

The entire time 

Sing and dance

In a trance

Meet the band

And then we can 

Behind the scenes

Tour bus and hotel

Still not thinking

We can tell

Party on party people

Make that noise

Oh boy 

In trouble we are

Panties down

Now we frown

We did not know

Not all things are what they seem 

Party smiles and in between

Ugly 

Smiles at first

Burst in emotions

Demotion  like a job

From manager to nothing

Rockstar to loser

Carry that with  you

You think your with someone who cares

Beware
 
You are the only one that can think about  you

No one else will hold that degree to compare 

the harm around 

before the music that is fun to go to shady

because you will always be a lady 

even if what you went through was scary

its not your fault

but the elder that is care free 

a liar to himself and his family

fear not but be true to yourself as best that you can be...................
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 4/19/2009 7:31:00 AM
Very true.. I have been there only in the 70`s..some things never change!! Nice write! Welcome! Hugs, Robuin~
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Date: 4/19/2009 3:54:00 AM
Welcome to poetry soup. This is a strong write. I wish every young girl could read it. I'm sending mail to your member area.
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