Gotta Sweep It

gotta sweep it under the rug my carpet is an flying machine ? ... .. . 17 sylable contest write 17sylables ...exactly...
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Gauthier Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 3:18 PM
Congrats on your win, Pipping.
Roper Avatar
December 28, 2017 at 10:26 AM
Great verse, Pipping, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve~`*
Gupta Avatar
December 28, 2017 at 9:16 AM
Enjoyed reading the monoku ... Congratulations ...
Inman Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 7:29 AM
Clever use of words.
Dietrich Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 10:05 PM
Cool write! That old magic carpet ride!!! Oh, and congrats on the winner list.
One Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 2:35 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the Monoku 1 contest
Andresen Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 2:14 PM
- Great written - Much said a few words - Congratulations! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 9:45 AM
I like it :)
Stars Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 11:11 AM
hop on this mad flying machine then ...
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