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Gotta Sweep It

gotta sweep it under the rug my carpet is an flying machine ? ... .. . 17 sylable contest write 17sylables ...exactly...

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Date: 1/2/2018 3:18:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Pipping.

Date: 12/28/2017 10:26:00 AM

Great verse, Pipping, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve~`*

Date: 12/28/2017 9:16:00 AM

Enjoyed reading the monoku ... Congratulations ...

Date: 12/27/2017 7:29:00 AM

Clever use of words.

Date: 12/26/2017 10:05:00 PM

Cool write! That old magic carpet ride!!! Oh, and congrats on the winner list.

Date: 12/26/2017 2:35:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in the Monoku 1 contest

Date: 12/26/2017 2:14:00 PM

- Great written - Much said a few words - Congratulations! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Date: 12/22/2017 9:45:00 AM

I like it :)

Pipping Stars
Date: 12/22/2017 11:11:00 AM

hop on this mad flying machine then ...