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“Tingly skies full of surprise oh how I love when with surmise, the little rascal aims his dart as if it were, poetic art” Sneakin’ up like a thief in the night, no warning, no clue he’s playin’ hearts like a game just what he must do Laughter spills, eyes lock, ain’t no subtle moves love’s wild dance got you caught in the grooves A quick shot, a sharp hit, no time to rehearse he’s messin’ with your mind and it’s only getting worse No armor, no defense, no chance to undo “When cupid’s arrow aims for you, there isn’t much that you can do”
8/10/25 Contest: Gotcha Sponsor: Mystic Rose Rose

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Date: 8/14/2025 3:01:00 AM
Brilliant and I'm sure you will rate high. Pity I can't rhyme like you.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/14/2025 10:07:00 PM
Oh victor im sure your rhymes are amazing! ;) thank you my friend!
Date: 8/13/2025 3:31:00 PM
I thought I had already commented on this delightful little poetic piece of yours, Poetess. My mistake. Put a big grin on my face I can tell you - love it! :) john
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/14/2025 10:07:00 PM
lol John you are silly! But appreciate the comment and read ! Warmest regards my friend!;)
Date: 8/11/2025 8:56:00 PM
I love it. Your pow pow pow write bullet delivers Cupid's arrow, a wonderful read. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/14/2025 10:06:00 PM
CayCay thank you my friend! Much appreciated!:)
Date: 8/10/2025 9:58:00 PM
So cute, Brenda. Did this contest close?. Hope it wins or has won already!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/11/2025 12:09:00 AM
Thank you Andrea appreciate the read!:) I do believe the contest is still open…,but not sure!
Date: 8/10/2025 12:01:00 PM
Haha, this is fun and catchy! Totally nails that surprise hit of love nobody sees coming. Nice work!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/10/2025 6:22:00 PM
Rowena thank you so much! lol it was a fun write for sure!:)
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