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“Tingly skies full of surprise oh how I love when with surmise, the little rascal aims his dart as if it were, poetic art” Sneakin’ up like a thief in the night, no warning, no clue he’s playin’ hearts like a game just what he must do Laughter spills, eyes lock, ain’t no subtle moves love’s wild dance got you caught in the grooves A quick shot, a sharp hit, no time to rehearse he’s messin’ with your mind and it’s only getting worse No armor, no defense, no chance to undo “When cupid’s arrow aims for you, there isn’t much that you can do”
8/10/25 Contest: Gotcha Sponsor: Mystic Rose Rose
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Buhagiar Avatar
August 14, 2025 at 3:01 AM
Brilliant and I'm sure you will rate high. Pity I can't rhyme like you.
Chiri Avatar
August 14, 2025 at 10:07 PM
Oh victor im sure your rhymes are amazing! ;) thank you my friend!
Fleming Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 3:31 PM
I thought I had already commented on this delightful little poetic piece of yours, Poetess. My mistake. Put a big grin on my face I can tell you - love it! :) john
Chiri Avatar
August 14, 2025 at 10:07 PM
lol John you are silly! But appreciate the comment and read ! Warmest regards my friend!;)
Godwin Avatar
August 11, 2025 at 8:56 PM
I love it. Your pow pow pow write bullet delivers Cupid's arrow, a wonderful read. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Chiri Avatar
August 14, 2025 at 10:06 PM
CayCay thank you my friend! Much appreciated!:)
Dietrich Avatar
August 10, 2025 at 9:58 PM
So cute, Brenda. Did this contest close?. Hope it wins or has won already!
Chiri Avatar
August 11, 2025 at 12:09 AM
Thank you Andrea appreciate the read!:) I do believe the contest is still open…,but not sure!
Velasco Avatar
August 10, 2025 at 12:01 PM
Haha, this is fun and catchy! Totally nails that surprise hit of love nobody sees coming. Nice work!
Chiri Avatar
August 10, 2025 at 6:22 PM
Rowena thank you so much! lol it was a fun write for sure!:)
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