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“Tingly skies full of surprise oh how I love when with surmise, the little rascal aims his dart as if it were, poetic art” Sneakin’ up like a thief in the night, no warning, no clue he’s playin’ hearts like a game just what he must do Laughter spills, eyes lock, ain’t no subtle moves love’s wild dance got you caught in the grooves A quick shot, a sharp hit, no time to rehearse he’s messin’ with your mind and it’s only getting worse No armor, no defense, no chance to undo “When cupid’s arrow aims for you, there isn’t much that you can do”
8/10/25 Contest: Gotcha Sponsor: Mystic Rose Rose

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Date: 8/11/2025 8:56:00 PM
I love it. Your pow pow pow write bullet delivers Cupid's arrow, a wonderful read. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 8/10/2025 9:58:00 PM
So cute, Brenda. Did this contest close?. Hope it wins or has won already!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/11/2025 12:09:00 AM
Thank you Andrea appreciate the read!:) I do believe the contest is still open…,but not sure!
Date: 8/10/2025 12:01:00 PM
Haha, this is fun and catchy! Totally nails that surprise hit of love nobody sees coming. Nice work!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/10/2025 6:22:00 PM
Rowena thank you so much! lol it was a fun write for sure!:)

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