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13.28pm August 10, 2025

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Tingly skies full of surprise, oh how I love when with surmise
The little rascal aims his dart as if it were, poetic art!
This makes everyone exciting… can’t wait for his launching
Drawing two loving hearts, yours and your future sweetheart’s.

Sweet angel for pairs of pure doves, bound them with so much love
Little rascal casting his magic, as if powered by romantic lyric!
No one can ever resist, true love in one’s heart really exist
His drawn hearts live with joy…you can’t separate, can’t destroy!

Cute angel, why don’t you give us a clue if love drops like a dew?
Little rascal gives heart’s downpouring graces, as if songs and dances!
Lovers go with every flow of rhythms, for love is an unending hymn 
By this adorable ambassador of love, blessings shower from up above!

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/11/2025 11:37:00 AM

So charming, dearest Len! You extol the playfulness of love and the fact that you never know where or when it will appear! I love the image of love as a "rascal!" This is really delightful, my friend! Sending you blessings of joy! Best wishes for the contest!

Len Gasun
Date: 9/7/2025 5:22:00 AM

Thank you so much belatedly my dear poet friend Sam for reading my poem, your very uplifting and inspiring thoughts /words and your loving wishes in the contest. I always wish you the best too. Hugs. God bless!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/10/2025 9:48:00 PM

A very sweet write, my dear friend

Len Gasun
Date: 8/31/2025 2:17:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear poet friend. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/10/2025 12:13:00 PM

What a lovely "GOTCHA" write you have here. Love It... Pretty Angel Picture... "Good Luck" We both did this contest. Hugs... Have a lovely/blessed day writing away...............

Len Gasun
Date: 8/30/2025 8:13:00 PM

Thank you belatedtly for reading my poem, your inspiring words and loving best wishes my dear poet friend Paula. God bless you always. Have a happy and blessed Sunday/wkend and a wonderful new week ahead! Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/10/2025 11:31:00 AM

- What a lovely poem, Len :) - The little rascal is so cute :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Len Gasun
Date: 8/17/2025 7:37:00 AM

I agree with you dearest poet friend Anne-lise. He's/She's so cute that's why I was so inspired to write. Thanks for reading and your uplifting words dear. Blessings to you always! Hugs

John Fleming

Date: 8/10/2025 11:13:00 AM

A mischievous little devil as well...those darts don't always go where they are aimed. Lol. :) john

Len Gasun
Date: 8/17/2025 7:30:00 AM

lol... maybe when that little rascal is sleepy? Thanks for reading my poem my dear poet friend. Blessings to you always. Hugs