Gossamer Wisps

mists enshroud the trees

          sol intervenes to sear earth

                    haze will dissipate

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Placed No. 8 in Raul Moreno's "Natures Breath" Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 2, 2010 at 8:24 PM
always enjoying your read no matter the form, nicely done,Bob,..p..d
Anderson Avatar
April 30, 2010 at 9:10 AM
Congrats on your win in the contest, Robert..Very nice and thnx for always leaving kind comments for Audrey and me...your friend, Jimmy
Freeman Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 11:27 AM
Congratulations on your # 8 Robert. Good job trooper.Smile! Agape, Moses
Taylor Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 10:51 AM
Another good one, Chief.
Sweetheart Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 5:42 AM
Congrats Bob on your winning poem in Raul's contest with your magnificent write.. another achievement for u to enjoy and cherish..luv.. "Sweetheart" ..
Moreno Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 3:43 AM
Robert, congratulations on your success in my Nature's Breath contest...Raul
Lopez Avatar
April 25, 2010 at 7:17 PM
this is a very nice entry Robert good luck in the contest.
Goff Avatar
April 25, 2010 at 7:15 PM
WOW! now I must go see this photo! I have seen amazing haikus resulting! Chief! this one is a beauty! jimbo
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