Gossamer Wings

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Gossamer wings are dancing on spicy wind, In maddening swirls of color and sunshine! Red mists scattered, gone around the bend, And mauve wisteria cascades from its vine. Hummingbird premieres in dance hall days, Along with butterflies stunningly varicolored. Colors travel with winds in the sunny blaze, Over the tall emerald grasses, lately stirred.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/13/2021 12:43:00 PM

Hello Judy Buehler, I love the scene of your poem. Humming birds are beautiful birds they fly backwards sometimes. Hugs.Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/14/2021 11:44:00 AM

Hello Evelyn, I love the humming birds. They are my favs. next to the Cardinal, Blue Jays, Doves, & Sparrows. I am happy to hear this. Hugs.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/13/2021 3:53:00 PM

Hello Darlene, I have heard that said. Birds are a marvel, aren't they? Your words of appreciation mean so much. Thank you.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/12/2021 10:51:00 PM

Your poem is stunningly beautiful as your imagery. Well done.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/13/2021 11:22:00 AM

You have my warmest thanks. :=)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 12/12/2021 8:16:00 PM

Evelyn, Pretty as a picture, and luckier than Aladdin's lamp. 'Hummingbird premieres in dance hall days,' Maybe you're the Genie ready to grant three wishes. -Richard

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/13/2021 11:20:00 AM

Well, the first wish I'd grant would be yours, Richard. Thank you so much for the happy thoughts. Evelyn

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/12/2021 6:12:00 PM

You've written a really detailed piece of poetry, Evelyn. The final two sentences are pretty intriguing: Colors travel with winds in the sunny blaze, Over the tall emerald grasses, lately stirred.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/12/2021 6:59:00 PM

Thank your for your remarks, full of pleasant insights, Lasaad. So uplifting! :=)