Gorgeous Garden

(a few pairs of haikus. 
Enjoy this unique style of writing and pen on, 
dear gorgeous poets! 
Let your poetic talent grow like a gorgeous garden...
thinking of a garden, 
here's a poem dedicated to gardening!):

Dirty hands touched ground
I run my hands on fresh land
I'm a GARDENER!

Hands handling hope
I take my tools and work hard
I'm a HARD worker! 
(Oh yeah! You can tell by the sweat of my brow!)

Loner with tired hands
I do labor with fervor - 
Not a forlorner! 

I take my time . . . to graze
Around my Gorgeous Garden 
I'm a true GREEN THUMB!

"I work till I see the beads of sweat down my face - that's evidence that I'm a dedicated worker on this liberating land...
I work to see what tomorrow brings...I'm standing my ground and I'm plowing my gorgeous garden!
I handle difficult tasks back then and right this instant! Now, I know where I stand! I can make a stand in this land that is 100% grand!
With my gardening tools and I, we can work miracles and we can work dusk to dawn again and again!" - a quote that I have made!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 6/18/2014 1:41:00 AM
Beautiful Haikus David. I love my garden just wish i had time to deal with it properly. have had the first courgettes and strawberries this week - nothing like growing your own:-) Hugs as ever Jan xxxx
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/18/2014 2:56:00 AM
i picked my firs courgettes and strawberries out of my garden that's what I meant sorry. Got peas nearly ready too and cucumbers - amazing to think what we get from just one tiny seed - suppose you can say that about babies too lol. Hugs as ever jan xxxxx
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J.W. Earnings
Date: 6/18/2014 2:26:00 AM
thank you - my mom and I have a community garden and one on my porch! We are clever and creative that's why! Most everything takes time. Watering the plants even takes time. Make sure to pull dem weeds too! You should read my poem Weeds. You'd like that one as well. What do you mean by the last sentence? hmm...anyways, have a splendid week and plant on.
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