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Goosebumps Where Did You Come From

Out of the blue from head to toe, you are such an unexpected blow. I never saw you coming, you were on my skin a drumming. When I am happy or sad you will show up, you make my body want to jump. Now! I say it is time for you to go, good by and don't be slow. 11/8/2019

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Date: 11/19/2019 10:22:00 AM
Delightful fun write. Hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/27/2019 7:42:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed it. It was fun to write. Have a great day writing..........
Date: 11/13/2019 5:35:00 PM
A fun piece, love, "you were on my skin a drumming. "
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/15/2019 8:34:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you felt my drums. Cute cat......
Date: 11/10/2019 10:04:00 AM
Enjoyed reading , Paula, I love the pattern, good luck in the contest. Hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/10/2019 11:35:00 AM
Thanks for reading, writing and your best wishes. Glad you like it...........
Date: 11/9/2019 9:02:00 AM
Charming form, Paula.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/10/2019 11:32:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Always love to hear from the other writers....
Date: 11/8/2019 9:15:00 PM
Oh, I figured out I needed to go across the large space to read the other side! THEN it made sense and I really liked it!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/10/2019 11:33:00 AM
Glad you like it. Thanks for stopping and writing. Enjoy writing........

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