Goodnight Soupers

Music from her bangles, sleepless night now waiting, another moonlight sonata, goodnight. ===================== By:kashinath karmakar NOT FOR CONTEST
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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K. Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 5:15 PM
This was a smooth write, Kash! & advanced happy birthday to you! :D
Dietrich Avatar
September 9, 2011 at 10:29 PM
this is beautiful, Kash. Let's go see if the "right" one was any better. haha.
Onclaud Avatar
September 9, 2011 at 12:37 PM
kashi, this is breathtaking.. line 2 needs 2 words only, line 4 needs 4 words.. oh what the heck.. i am n love with this....night, night.. come visit! :)
Sweetheart Avatar
September 9, 2011 at 12:01 PM
very sweet music Kash.. luv the bangles here and in other piece too luv.. do soupers ever sleep? oh just a thought luv.. nice...
Horne Avatar
September 9, 2011 at 10:12 AM
I thought you were announcing you were leaving the Soup for a moment, Kash! Very sweet piece
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September 9, 2011 at 6:28 AM
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