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Goodnight Kiss

Living in another world singing a different song. Keeps me away from you it’s been for far too long. So I’ll take the early plane to get back home tonight. I can’t get to sleep anymore if I can’t kiss you goodnight. Never wanted to go away but I just thought I should. Doing things, the best I can to bring about some good. I need to be home again singing a familiar song. Knowing I am with you back where I belong. I’m taking the early plane to be home with you tonight. Knowing we’ll be together and I can kiss you goodnight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/18/2013 2:50:00 AM
Yes, the ryhming needs a bit of extra attention. You don't always see it yourself and need it pointing out. Thank you. Tim
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Date: 9/17/2013 11:20:00 AM
This is an endearing piece unto the heart, and I could quite clearly feel your longing; the emotion was well-expressed. Some of your rhymes need some tightening and polishing, but these little imperfections do not detract from its simplicity and beauty. Kudos! ;)
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