Carol Sunshine Brown Poet Couplet

Goodnight Dear P D

Go to sleep dear P.D...you need your rest
Tomorrow will be busy...got to be at your best

Children and grandchild...you know they are wild
They'll wear you out...and thats putting it mild

Oh no the resturant...you better not forget
Cooking and serving...your body wet with sweat

A shower, a shower...and you can wind down
Asleep, asleep in your bed...Not making a sound

Send me to sleep contest
Sponsor: P.D.
Written by Carol ~Sunshine~ Brown
10/25/2012
2nd Place Winner

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen December 27, 2016 at 7:03 AM Sometimes sleep is not easy to get. (Especially with a wild child or a few! LOL)

James Tate July 6, 2016 at 4:32 PM Way to go Carol . Good story of working mother. Is there a misspell in word? resturant. Sorry about that.

Connie Marcum Wong February 2, 2015 at 3:11 AM This is so sweet Carol. Congratulations on your wonderful win!

Poet Destroyer A September 13, 2013 at 9:48 PM Good Night Sweetest Carol... xox...PD

Debbie Duncan June 22, 2013 at 6:19 PM Love it Carol,,,,, no doubt Linda does too ;} and you won too " cool" ;} have an awesome day Carol ;}

Poet Destroyer A March 18, 2013 at 7:27 PM Hello Carol, it was nice seeing you comment some of the new poets... hope you stop by to say hi to me sooonnn...xox~ PD

Karl Marszalowicz February 21, 2013 at 1:56 AM Sounds like my parents If we ever gave them a break at all! I do regret that.

Poet Destroyer A January 11, 2013 at 10:23 PM Saving the best one on this page for last...(tonight that is)... Good Night...my dearest Carol....love ~PD

Joe Maverick December 26, 2012 at 6:05 PM Well put write here Carol; hope P D Gets through it O K. L O L also wishing You the seasons Best.."

Poet Destroyer A December 24, 2012 at 8:06 PM Carol, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD

Cecilia Macfarlane December 5, 2012 at 7:46 AM Wonderful write and win Carol! Hugs

Ajayi Angel-Simon November 30, 2012 at 4:55 AM So creative Carol... Congrats... Wish it was for me because of the end rhymes and the plot of the poem... I love it... Esquire! PD... U'r special

Sara Kendrick November 8, 2012 at 1:03 PM I bet that PD liked this one..Enjoyed reading work from your very creative pen..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Joy Wellington October 29, 2012 at 9:24 PM Congrats Carol on your lullaby for PD making it in the winners circle. One love. Joy Wells

Sha'Ntez Jefferson October 29, 2012 at 1:36 PM congrats on your win and thanks for stopping by to congratulate me

Bukang Liwayway October 29, 2012 at 10:48 AM Congratulations friend Carol for winning 2nd place in PD’s “Send Me To Sleep” contest. Cheers!! (^_^) love Maria

Carol Sunshine Brown October 29, 2012 at 6:39 AM Thank you everyone and I am glad you liked it P.D.... Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 28, 2012 at 12:28 AM SUPER CONGRATS CAROL ON A FIN WIN BY PD LUV ..

S.Jagathsimhan Nair October 27, 2012 at 6:27 PM A sweet lullaby, Congrats!! Jag

Andrea Dietrich October 27, 2012 at 10:03 AM VERY nice, Carol. One i had not seen yet. BIG congrats on the win.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl October 27, 2012 at 3:26 AM Big congrats Carol, I'm just gonna take a nap xx

Olusegun Arowolo October 27, 2012 at 12:47 AM Wonderful piece,Nice presentation,Carol....Beautiful dedication to a meticulous lady...Kudos to you..Congratulations on your superb win in this contest...

Tahera Mannan October 26, 2012 at 11:03 PM It is lovely Carol. Many congrats.

Poet Destroyer A October 26, 2012 at 9:35 PM Carol, CONGRATULATIONS with your awesome poem. :-) thank you for the ZZZZZZZZZZ's~ in my "Send me to sleep....... contest" enjoyed the comfort and thought ~Always & Forever * PD

Harry Horsman October 26, 2012 at 8:53 AM wonderful Carol, you have done it again, written a beauty.....just love this...

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