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Goodnight Dear P D

Go to sleep dear P.D...you need your rest
Tomorrow will be busy...got to be at your best
Children and grandchild...you know they are wild
They'll wear you out...and thats putting it mild
Oh no the resturant...you better not forget
Cooking and serving...your body wet with sweat
A shower, a shower...and you can wind down
Asleep, asleep in your bed...Not making a sound
Send me to sleep contest Sponsor: P.D. Written by Carol ~Sunshine~ Brown 10/25/2012 2nd Place Winner

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/27/2016 7:03:00 AM
Sometimes sleep is not easy to get. (Especially with a wild child or a few! LOL)
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Date: 7/6/2016 4:32:00 PM
Way to go Carol . Good story of working mother. Is there a misspell in word? resturant. Sorry about that.
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Date: 2/2/2015 3:11:00 AM
This is so sweet Carol. Congratulations on your wonderful win!
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Date: 1/15/2014 9:54:00 AM
I shoud have been in this one
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Date: 9/13/2013 9:48:00 PM
Good Night Sweetest Carol... xox...PD
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Date: 6/22/2013 6:19:00 PM
Love it Carol,,,,, no doubt Linda does too ;} and you won too " cool" ;} have an awesome day Carol ;}
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Date: 3/18/2013 7:27:00 PM
Hello Carol, it was nice seeing you comment some of the new poets... hope you stop by to say hi to me sooonnn...xox~ PD
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Date: 2/21/2013 1:56:00 AM
Sounds like my parents If we ever gave them a break at all! I do regret that.
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Date: 1/11/2013 10:23:00 PM
Saving the best one on this page for last...(tonight that is)... Good Night...my dearest Carol....love ~PD
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Date: 12/26/2012 6:05:00 PM
Well put write here Carol; hope P D Gets through it O K. L O L also wishing You the seasons Best.."
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Date: 12/24/2012 8:06:00 PM
Carol, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD
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Date: 12/5/2012 7:46:00 AM
Wonderful write and win Carol! Hugs
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Date: 11/30/2012 4:55:00 AM
So creative Carol... Congrats... Wish it was for me because of the end rhymes and the plot of the poem... I love it... Esquire! PD... U'r special
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Date: 11/8/2012 1:03:00 PM
I bet that PD liked this one..Enjoyed reading work from your very creative pen..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 10/29/2012 9:24:00 PM
Congrats Carol on your lullaby for PD making it in the winners circle. One love. Joy Wells
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Date: 10/29/2012 1:36:00 PM
congrats on your win and thanks for stopping by to congratulate me
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Date: 10/29/2012 10:48:00 AM
Congratulations friend Carol for winning 2nd place in PD’s “Send Me To Sleep” contest. Cheers!! (^_^) love Maria
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Date: 10/29/2012 6:39:00 AM
Thank you everyone and I am glad you liked it P.D.... Love, Carol
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Date: 10/28/2012 12:28:00 AM
SUPER CONGRATS CAROL ON A FIN WIN BY PD LUV ..
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Date: 10/27/2012 6:27:00 PM
A sweet lullaby, Congrats!! Jag
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Date: 10/27/2012 10:03:00 AM
VERY nice, Carol. One i had not seen yet. BIG congrats on the win.
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Date: 10/27/2012 3:26:00 AM
Big congrats Carol, I'm just gonna take a nap xx
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Date: 10/27/2012 12:47:00 AM
Wonderful piece,Nice presentation,Carol....Beautiful dedication to a meticulous lady...Kudos to you..Congratulations on your superb win in this contest...
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Date: 10/26/2012 11:03:00 PM
It is lovely Carol. Many congrats.
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Date: 10/26/2012 9:35:00 PM
Carol, CONGRATULATIONS with your awesome poem. :-) thank you for the ZZZZZZZZZZ's~ in my "Send me to sleep....... contest" enjoyed the comfort and thought ~Always & Forever * PD
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