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Goodnight Baby

I wrote a song that reads your name... And lit a candle that sits near our frame... I closed my eyes and whispered through a dream... Then I awakened to a room lightened by the moon's beam... There you rest, your eyes moving in a peaceful sleep... I could just lay their for hours and with a heart so deep... My fingers run through your hair as I lightly kiss your forehead... Then my eyes start to flicker as I blow out the candle along side our bed... I pull you close as a small grin on your face makes it known... Without a bat of an eye you kiss my cheek and we are off in our zone... Goodnight baby is whispered in the dark for only I could hear... With the blanket pulled up tight we drift asleep as our hearts beat so near...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/28/2010 10:49:00 AM
What s very sweet and romantic write this is-- lucky lady you have beside you, Michael :) smiles --nikko :)
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Date: 12/27/2010 9:38:00 AM
Hello Michael, This has touched me so, hard to read but I have to get on with life. This is going into my favorites. Its simply Beautiful Michael! As Always, Shar
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Date: 12/24/2010 9:32:00 PM
Gud one. Merry Christmas to U & Ur fly. Luv/best wishes......Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 12/23/2010 4:23:00 PM
This is going on my favorites, thankyou for your eyes softening heart warming love write... Wonderful, as always!
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Date: 12/23/2010 10:29:00 AM
A lovely heartwarming write Michael.. Beautiful images so vividly painted.. Love Wilma
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Date: 12/22/2010 5:37:00 PM
This is so lovely, Michael, such innocence, Harry
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Date: 12/22/2010 4:11:00 PM
Super romantic one Michael.. quite a visual expression of luv and romance and sweet enjoyment of two souls blending as one... definitely making Ron read this one before bed tonight..luv.. enjoyed my W.K. from your Jersey Girl with luv.always..
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Date: 12/22/2010 3:32:00 PM
Wow! glad to be back i hope,, a wonderful poem very romantic in a very caring way.. enjoyed your poem.. And yes I'm doing a whole lot better.. I have lots to catch up on. Love your little sweet write,, have a wonderful day,..p.d.
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Date: 12/22/2010 3:18:00 PM
Fantastic flow of pen undeterred and with lovely feelings, Michael
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