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Goodgrief

" GoodGrief! " How now then might truth be known~ Seems 'tis question thusly grown~ Of seeds sown in winds now blown~ Of which we all now surely groan~ Mayhap 'tis he who thinks other be me~ Should find manner in which so to see~ That then which could if'n he would~ Decide who's who & to whom we should~ I'll say this then of that & such~ 'Tis quite rightly a tad bit much~ To think that drink of similarity~ Is flask then empty of disparity~ He is he & I am me & not then thus no other~ Who cannot be me & so should be he I'd ruther~ T'other is he as well not thus so same as him~ Surely now we can see such chance is mighty slim~ SeaWolf ©

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/14/2011 9:47:00 AM
Rightly so, Seawolf...it is not so simple for one to find the who of someone while trapped elsewhere. Thought honed by past connaisance can make it difficult to move ahead? It's a shame, for there are multitudes of interestiong people to learn from, and with whom one may share. Best wishes, Mikki
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Date: 11/4/2011 6:08:00 PM
I had to read it 3 times to sort out the wild structure you bring to verse. Never seen anything like it and I think it rocks with subtle wit. :)
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Date: 10/29/2011 11:49:00 PM
you are the master of this form, another wonderful piece that I thoroughly enjoyed tonight, thank you
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Date: 10/29/2011 11:07:00 PM
I liked the style and structure of this poem! Pretty awesome, I must say!! Always, Laura
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