Goodbyes

                  death
                  winter
          leaves moist eyes
          gliding goodbyes
                 guilt
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kendrick Avatar
November 20, 2023 at 8:33 AM
Congratulations on this winning work in the contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K
Andresen Avatar
November 20, 2023 at 2:15 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful Lanterne in Joseph May's contest, Sabrina :) - hugs
Empress Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 2:31 AM
Poignant heartfelt write that leaves an impression, one that defines grief in few syllables so well. Congratulations on your well deserved win, pleasure reading this
Millicent  Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 11:22 AM
Thank you so much for your continued support. I appreciate your kind support and continued words of encouragement.
May Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 7:29 PM
Congrats on your wi Sabrina,n Very nicely done
Millicent  Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 11:20 AM
Thank you I really enjoyed trying this new form and letting my grief sit on the page. I appreciate the support.
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