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Goodbye To This Ivy

COMMON was it growing up from grounded poverty Ominous was the task; that it approached with glee Monumental; the first rung on an iron ladder would be Making its way; climbing would not always be; sunny Over time, this world; this way; driven to near insanity Now, though, looking back; It has earned a legacy It spread from post to post; life was not a gimme Vigorously working at that point; if it died right there, no one would miss me Years it would take; growing up life's trellis before saying goodbye to this IVY

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Date: 10/20/2023 10:15:00 PM
This is a great, well written poem. Thought provoking. The title is intriguing too. The last line, in particular, is very profound. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you.
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Date: 10/21/2023 7:24:00 AM
I am very happy you found joy in this piece! Cordially A.S.
Date: 10/17/2023 12:39:00 PM
Deep and emotive. May your ivy never leave us.
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Date: 10/17/2023 1:54:00 PM
I have no plans to vacate this world anytime soon LOL. I have been musing on life cycles and emotions lately. So you are very much correct in your interpretation of what I was trying to portray. Respectfully A.S.
Date: 10/17/2023 12:37:00 AM
A good poem. Well done.
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Date: 10/17/2023 8:27:00 AM
Thank you! A.S.
Date: 10/17/2023 12:29:00 AM
I enjoyed your poetic thought; nice to read you
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Date: 10/17/2023 8:31:00 AM
Thank you MAHTAB, I appreciate you taking the time, also that it was enjoyable for you! Regards A.S.

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