Ijm Seven Poet Haiku

Goodbye Nana -Haiku Triplet-

Sea foam wash my feet:
Let me sink into the earth
My heels then my toes

Gentle breeze kiss me
So I may feel your majesty,
Whisper in my ear

Hands held on the shore
She holds me as the sea comes-
I love you Nana

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Ijm Seven January 6, 2016 at 5:51 PM thank you for reading one of my favorite poems. I know it is not a haiku by definition, but rather a series of three Haiku. Creating a single thought, theses three stanzas still feel like a Haiku...to me.