Goodbye My Love- For Contest Six Words

Ashes greying seafoam green.
She weeps.
02/22/2016 Contest: SIX WORDS Sponsor: John Lawless
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Selfa Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 2:07 AM
Poetry in just 6 words Arlene! Great Job! Congratulations! :) _HANS
Lamoureux Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 7:12 AM
Very Sad! Congrats.
A. Sharma Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 1:20 AM
Congrats on ur awesome win with this great poetry Arlene.
Gentry Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 12:49 PM
Congratulations on your win! Excellent!
A   Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 5:07 PM
Arlene, Congrats on your "SIX WORD win." LINDA
Allison Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 4:57 PM
dropping back with my congrats Arlene:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 3:55 PM
this was one of my very favorites. RIGHT HERE. congrats.
Jameson Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 11:50 AM
A riveting write, Arlene. Congrats on your placement with the work.
Dietrich Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 3:46 PM
Oh, at first I did not see the second line. NOW i really love this!!
Allison Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 2:21 PM
so few words say so much Arlene:-( good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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