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Goodbye Earth

The world left us behind
Burning in her atmosphere
The cities and oceans vaporised
All that we were aflame

Blackbird like a prayer bolted
Life grew a bad temperament
An earthquake death faulted
We didn’t hear the trumpet

Drowning in this deep silence 
I miss the buzz of a mosquito
I hear the sound of my own tears 
A waterfall into an inferno

The earth cried blue rays 
A trillion tones sprayed like spice 
Her death brought dark days 
Her DNA spores into empty space
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Tadros Avatar
June 4, 2015 at 4:42 PM
First the title of the poem attracted my attention then I found myself taken away by the words. I like it.
Mamabolo Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 5:04 AM
Creative and interesting piece of writing Thabang, keep it up...Lekau
Ngoma Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 5:25 PM
Hi Lekau...ke lebogela mantswe a gago morena...rgds, Thabang
Gifford Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 4:57 AM
A poem about a great tragedy. Emotional to read but well written. Sometimes we question why?
Ngoma Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 5:26 PM
Hi Darlene...thanks, it was intended to provoke a reaction at what we stand to lose..rgds, Thabang
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