Sashi Prabhu Poet Rhyme

Goodbye Darkness

Stillness of the night,and the dullness in my sight,
A cold dark cloudy winter night,The pathway lights shine on bright.

The cool breeze envelops my surround,
A few dew drops from the moistened leaves drips aground.

The languid wing of air, it carries,
FragranceOf blossomed flowers, trees and berries.

Once again the freshness in my mind,
Is awakening from the darkness blind.

Welcome, come in the joys of happiness,
Its now time to  "bid adeiu" to darkness

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Kim Merryman April 10, 2012 at 1:34 PM Sashi, congrats on your win with this lovely write. Love, Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown April 10, 2012 at 7:11 AM A belated congratulations on your well deserved placement in Brian's "Ten Lines" contest Sashi. Love, Carol

Kash Poet April 8, 2012 at 12:33 AM Beautiful imagery here Prabhu.Congratulations on your win! Sashi Prabhu April 8, 2012 at 5:46 AM thank you Kash.~sashi Kash Poet April 8, 2012 at 12:35 AM Oh....yes Sashi!you told me once to call u Sashi.

Fabiyas M V April 7, 2012 at 9:09 PM Beautifully penned, Sashi.Congratulations on your well deserved win!I hope you read line no.4 and 10 of the verse again and make it even greater one.I expect more lovely poems form your pen.With FABIYAS Sashi Prabhu April 8, 2012 at 5:45 AM thank you Fab, i have tried to do what you guided me to... thanks a million..........i usually put it down straight from the mind and that a reason why these things creep. i will evolve as a better bard with the love and guidance of all the soupers.....~sashi

Joann Grisetti April 7, 2012 at 9:16 AM Wonderfull poem. Congratulations on your place in the contest. Sashi Prabhu April 7, 2012 at 1:15 PM thanks for the wishes JOann.........~sashi

Samia Ali Salama April 7, 2012 at 6:49 AM A beautiful write Sashi! Congratulations to you ...Samia Sashi Prabhu April 7, 2012 at 1:16 PM thanks SAMIA............~SASHI

Gwendolen Song April 7, 2012 at 3:18 AM Sashi,,,at the top of the list of excellence in this contest...right where u belong! Phenom write! Gwendolen

Lucilla Carrillo April 5, 2012 at 12:08 PM Sashi; this short but very good. I liked it very much. Darkness is alright, but the darkness of the mind is something else. We have to say goodbye. lucilla Sashi Prabhu April 5, 2012 at 12:24 PM yes absolutely ....thanks for stopping by............~sashi

Poet Destroyer A April 3, 2012 at 11:43 AM Sashi, yes... goodbey,,, to darkness.. I must say... this is a very good couplet poem..love the way you brightened your own thoughts here... adding this to my favorites...you have some very good lines here...always..pd Sashi Prabhu April 3, 2012 at 7:26 PM thanks for the warm words PD...ALWAYS encouraging..........~sashi