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Goodbye

Such goodbye reaches out its arms a time when the big clock alarms, its cry reaches across the skies that resonates with all our sighs. To fall within this gloomy scene, where earth is dressed in gray, extreme and bleak of dark surrounds the night, while roses bleed without delight. Goobye Contest/ Nayda Ivette Negron 28 Sept 2016

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Date: 9/27/2016 3:45:00 PM
ohh, the last line strongly wraps up the whole scene of this piece.. well done, ashley; glad to have read your comment on my page..huggs
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