Goodbye

Such goodbye reaches out its arms
a time when the big clock alarms,

its cry  reaches across the skies 
that resonates with all our sighs.

To  fall within this gloomy scene, 
where earth is dressed in gray, extreme

and bleak of dark surrounds the night, 
while  roses  bleed  without delight.


Goobye Contest/ Nayda Ivette Negron
28 Sept 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Onclaud Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 3:45 PM
ohh, the last line strongly wraps up the whole scene of this piece.. well done, ashley; glad to have read your comment on my page..huggs
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