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Goodbye

Standing beneath the midnight sky 
  Up above us the clouds go passing by 
    The moon so bright shone down its light 
       And the cool ocean breeze caresses our skin 
          As we hold each other tight 
             My lover and I 
                About to say our goodbyes 
                   Any day now he'll be gone and I'll be left all alone 
                      To gaze into the midnight sky 
 As it rolls on and on and on......

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/26/2016 11:51:00 AM

Hi, Carlene, thank you for the reply on the bottom. I have a question for you, You sent me a soup mail, yesterday. I haven't gotten a letter back. Did I answer your question correctly? :)

Carlene Simpson
Date: 2/26/2016 2:33:00 PM

Not quite, but I think I have a hunch as to what is going on. The details I don't know, but i'll send u another soup mail later.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/25/2016 8:04:00 PM

WE are left with a twinge of sadness but the beauty of that sky rolling on and on.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/24/2016 2:23:00 PM

Deep verse Carlene, it's a nice warm goodbye, the imagery is romantic until I read the sad departure. Nicely done. LINDA

Carlene Simpson
Date: 2/24/2016 3:28:00 PM

Hey Linda, how r u?....if I was able to post pics i'ld show you the exact scenery.