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Goodbye

After waving his hand to his beloved, a sailor gets into the ship and prepares for sailing across the deep, blue waters Little does he know a flood of tears are stinging the eyes of his lover, wondering whether he will still remain her husband, or will become the ocean’s husband, after drowning to her belly Storms roaring with rage every now and then, she doesn’t see any wage as a reason for her lover to go and hunt a rogue whale that capsizes ships “Goodbye”, she faintly whispers, as the ship sets for sail with her other piece of joy.....

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Date: 9/3/2016 4:42:00 AM
The dangers can be so deeply felt in your wonderful poem Teddy. Congratulations on your second placement! : ) 7
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Date: 8/29/2016 10:17:00 AM
Teddy, exactly what I was looking for dear friend...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/29/2016 4:04:00 PM
Yo are welcome always, Laura!! *^_^* Thank you so much for your warm applause, in your contest!! *^_^*
Date: 8/2/2015 11:19:00 PM
Superb write Teddy that's worthy of great win! Big congrats!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/3/2015 10:02:00 AM
Thank you for your applause and enjoying my work Dr. Upma! *^_^*
Date: 8/2/2015 5:48:00 PM
Evening Teddy...there's such a deep sense of loss here, the sea in all its vastness and the utter helplessness in brings...congrats on this masterful pen...(:heers, ******7bang
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/3/2015 10:01:00 AM
Good evening too Thabang! ;-) Thank you for your applause!
Date: 8/2/2015 4:12:00 PM
Teddy, that is deep, Congrats. SK
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/3/2015 9:57:00 AM
Thank you so much Skat! *^_^*
Date: 8/2/2015 8:19:00 AM
so emotional and sad a write Teddy congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/3/2015 9:56:00 AM
Thank you so much Jan! *^_^*
Date: 5/31/2015 12:38:00 AM
nice poem you have pebbed here Teddy
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/6/2015 7:33:00 AM
Thank you Lewis! :-)

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