Goodbye

After waving his hand
to his beloved, a sailor gets into
the ship and prepares for
sailing across the deep, blue waters

Little does he know a flood
of tears are stinging the eyes
of his lover, wondering whether
he will still remain her husband,
or will become the ocean’s husband,
after drowning to her belly

Storms roaring with rage
every now and then,
she doesn’t see any wage
as a reason for her lover
to go and hunt a rogue whale
that capsizes ships

“Goodbye”, she faintly whispers,
as the ship sets for sail
with her other piece of joy.....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Marcum Wong Avatar
September 3, 2016 at 4:42 AM
The dangers can be so deeply felt in your wonderful poem Teddy. Congratulations on your second placement! : ) 7
Scars Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 10:17 AM
Teddy, exactly what I was looking for dear friend...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
Kimathi Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 4:04 PM
Yo are welcome always, Laura!! *^_^* Thank you so much for your warm applause, in your contest!! *^_^*
A. Sharma Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 11:19 PM
Superb write Teddy that's worthy of great win! Big congrats!
Kimathi Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 10:02 AM
Thank you for your applause and enjoying my work Dr. Upma! *^_^*
Ngoma Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 5:48 PM
Evening Teddy...there's such a deep sense of loss here, the sea in all its vastness and the utter helplessness in brings...congrats on this masterful pen...(:heers, ******7bang
Kimathi Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 10:01 AM
Good evening too Thabang! ;-) Thank you for your applause!
A  Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 4:12 PM
Teddy, that is deep, Congrats. SK
Kimathi Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 9:57 AM
Thank you so much Skat! *^_^*
Allison Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 8:19 AM
so emotional and sad a write Teddy congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Kimathi Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 9:56 AM
Thank you so much Jan! *^_^*
Nyaga Avatar
May 31, 2015 at 12:38 AM
nice poem you have pebbed here Teddy
Kimathi Avatar
June 6, 2015 at 7:33 AM
Thank you Lewis! :-)
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