Goodbye

You said you got my back
But when i turn around i see no one
You promised to make me special
But am feeling so cheap,damn am on special
You thought you love me perhaps 
But now am drinking a litre per-herbs 
**** felt like you stabbing my heart and now it disturbs
The blood flow now my heart is leaking
So i thought i should just write a poem
So ama transport the food myself cause iam my own tube phloem
Neglected my friends and family so it was only just us two
Even got your name on my skin in a form of a tattoo
Die for you? oh yes i would have done that too
Am gone now
Wont even turn back
I'm scared of wrong turns
You watched me as the sun-burns
My forehead,heavy stuff on my mind **** feels like i have four heads
I guess i slept like a log and i just woke up in the fire place
You expected me to fold myself in half like a brief-case
I was going to brief you about the case 
But now i finally stood up
Hold myself together mybe am bio
Five fingers in the air including the palm,bye yooo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 1/22/2016 8:26:00 PM
TOM, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Always with LUV **SKAT**
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Date: 7/26/2014 4:10:00 PM
Beautiful, deep, inspirational write that I enjoyed reading! Best wishes.
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Date: 7/25/2014 5:14:00 PM
Tom,,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/25/2014 10:08:00 AM
A very warm welcome Tom! Keep going and keep doing the great work like this one..Appreciate the poems written by other poets and they'll appreciate your's :) You're welcome to visit my page anytime :) Good Luck and Have a nice day! :)"
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Date: 7/25/2014 5:55:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Tom :) - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/25/2014 3:41:00 AM
Welcome to poetry soup
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Date: 7/24/2014 10:53:00 AM
Thank you for sharing :)
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Date: 7/24/2014 10:28:00 AM
A very powerful write Tom. Good to see you put the past behind you and have moved on. Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 7/24/2014 9:56:00 AM
Hi Tom, this is such a clever, powerful inspirational write! BRAVO and welcome to PoetrySoup! Kindest regards.
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Date: 7/24/2014 9:35:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Tom. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
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