Goodbye

Goodbye is where I lie
when forever wasn't suppost to die

Goodbye to all the pain
that lies within 
for me to shade 

Goodbye to all the scattered lies
you left behind for me to find

Goodbye to all the dreams
we once shared
that will now thicken the air

Goodbye was always there
for me to find, Yet it hid
in what I thought we shared....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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October 7, 2026 at 11:00 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist,and I’d love to discuss the possibility of bringing this poem to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : [email protected]
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May 22, 2016 at 5:45 PM
Candis, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*"
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