Raquel P Poet I do not know?

Goodbye

A thick wall surrounds your heart
As you say till death do us part
I know you believe we are in love 
A couple so divine, made by heaven above

But you don't let me in, and I'm all alone
Your heart never truly becomes my home
I wait and I wait, but things never change
You still seem oh so very strange

Now it's to late
You sealed our fate
So before I die
I bid you goodbye

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Raquel P March 22, 2011 at 4:24 PM Thanks for ur kind words. This is not my experience, but my sympathy to people who have. I am sorry if anybody has had this terrible experience

Manouchka Doreus March 21, 2011 at 8:12 AM so sad, recently had that sort of experience, but i was on the other end

Dr.Ram Mehta March 19, 2011 at 6:57 PM Lovely and creative expressions, Raquel

Dennis Baze March 19, 2011 at 4:50 PM great job this flows well