Goodbye

i have tried to say goodbye
but its hard to say it to you
but i dont want to lie 
i  just want to tell you the truth
everything is not going to be fine
im sorry for being rude
but your being out of line,
fine talk i wont intrude
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Tacito Avatar
March 15, 2011 at 5:45 AM
Damn Carmen, I do understand this all too well. Painful. Great job!
Brown Avatar
March 14, 2011 at 12:08 PM
After a very super weekend I am back at the soup reading. I enjoyed reading your poetry this afternoon Carmen. There are so many diverse writers here and I am so happy I am able to read most of them. Have a wonderful week and may you find what you are looking for in life and in your writing. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
March 14, 2011 at 9:06 AM
Powerful thoughts of a raging mind, carmen
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