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Goodbye

i have tried to say goodbye but its hard to say it to you but i dont want to lie i just want to tell you the truth everything is not going to be fine im sorry for being rude but your being out of line, fine talk i wont intrude

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/15/2011 5:45:00 AM
Damn Carmen, I do understand this all too well. Painful. Great job!
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Date: 3/14/2011 12:08:00 PM
After a very super weekend I am back at the soup reading. I enjoyed reading your poetry this afternoon Carmen. There are so many diverse writers here and I am so happy I am able to read most of them. Have a wonderful week and may you find what you are looking for in life and in your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/14/2011 9:06:00 AM
Powerful thoughts of a raging mind, carmen
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