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Goodbye

You cannot see what I hold in my heart Your hate and your fear drive us apart. My loving pleading eyes beckon you to see. In outbursts of pain, you beg to let you be. My time is laboriously short as life in me dies. I reluctantly turn my head away from you and cry. You turn to me to hold me close, and you ask why. With one final heart-wrenching hug we said goodbye

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Date: 9/2/2024 11:10:00 AM
Hello Dexter, she was the one that want5ed to say good bye. She was the one that chanfgged. It was not you. Her heart is filled with hate for some reason unknown. In time you will fine someone who will appreciate you for you. Enjoy y7our day my friend. /darlene/.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/2/2024 2:31:00 PM
Hello Dexter, You are welcome. I enjoy your poem. Yes love is for life. My life. /Darlene/
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Dexter Greener
Date: 9/2/2024 2:05:00 PM
Thank you very much for those insightful comments and please enjoy Love for it is your life.

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