Jessica K Poet Acrostic

Goodbye

Gag at the thought that i actually liked you
Over you i became so very quickly
Oh how my heart sings now that your in much sorrow
Death to you would do nothing but please me
Because of what you have done to me in the past
You shall receive all the pain you gave to me
Eternity in hell will serve you right

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Emily Kroeger May 18, 2009 at 9:52 PM Wow hahahhahhaha Girl girl girl. wow this is wow amazzing. and oh yeah you cant write peshhh you lie you know that? you can write. and who are you talkin about in this??

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen May 18, 2009 at 6:39 PM Jessica, The first line got me right off the bat!! It's a S-T-R-O-N-G reality check. Nice...... AND bitter...... Is that anything like sweet and sour? I don't think so. I do have one question. Did you show this to him???? Strong, full of hate, and yet somehow very funny. Keep writing. Love, Dane

Cesar Cantu May 18, 2009 at 1:19 PM Again!!! Cool =D Karma is a very strong force that works only for and by itself jojojojo so trust in it wiii =D thanks for sharing wiiii and for the comments, bye bye

Edward Orozco May 18, 2009 at 1:09 PM This is a very heavy hearted write! Scary in a way.....talent speaks in this Acrostic poem! - jeremiah