Goodbye

Inconsistency plagues my soul
for to let loose of an accord
to serve myself tis toll 
unattended absence brings loneliness only to adore
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Krutsinger Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 8:17 PM
Your feelings are understood, and there is a real honesty to them also.
Crabtree Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 11:34 AM
Thank you Caren for your wonderful comment. :)
Dietrich Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 1:54 PM
I agree with Victor. Nicely emotive
Crabtree Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 11:35 AM
Thank you, Andrea for reading and commenting. I really appreciate it. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
October 4, 2020 at 11:25 PM
Great emotion in this poem. ~~
Crabtree Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 8:23 AM
Thank you for your nice comment. I really appreciate it :)
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