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Goodbye

Feeling such despair.. We were a pair.. My heart is heavy with a tear.. You left me.. Why can't you see I shall never let this be.. You never said goodbye.. May it be that our love was a lie? Often at times I feel as if.. I want to die.. You never said goodbye my love.. For you my love.. I would have gone above and beyond.. The sun .. The stars.. And the moon.. You have given up so soon.. You never said goodbye my darling.. Perhaps I awaited your return for so long.. For as long as the seasons change.. At full range As music plays a soulful song.. Which is a reminder of only you.. The love of my life you were my love.. I know you cannot hear my cries.. You had wrapped yourself in a bed of lies.. Although.. For now .. Sweet Darling.. It is I .. And.. With a sigh I shall say goodbye..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/16/2018 9:35:00 AM
Robertina, such deep and profound heartbreak speaks from a shattered heart that seeks to understand but also, to be understood. An intensely emotional poem of lost love so beautifully and sadly expressed. Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan
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Robertina B.
Date: 6/16/2018 12:11:00 PM
" Susan you are too kind, Sweet friend.. I thank you so much for your wonderful support.. Means so much to me.. Many blessings to you!"
Date: 6/12/2018 10:04:00 AM
Shades of 'Sister Carrie,' by Theodore Dreiser!...see soup mail. :) gw
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Date: 6/8/2018 9:59:00 PM
Difficult to understand heartbreak. You have done it so well in your poem. Robertina. Warren:)
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Robertina B.
Date: 6/9/2018 3:23:00 PM
Thank you so much, Warren.. Greatly appreciated!!
Date: 6/7/2018 10:36:00 PM
Adios...an emotional write indeed...All the best Robertina
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Robertina B.
Date: 6/9/2018 3:24:00 PM
Same to you, Arturo.. Thank you so much for your feedback!! I really appreciate it..
Date: 6/7/2018 10:23:00 PM
Loved this sad love write!!
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Robertina B.
Date: 6/9/2018 3:25:00 PM
Thank you for visiting and your feedback, Chance.. I appreciate it..

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