Good Night Face

Let me describe to you...my face, how I look 
Taken from my photo...on the face of my book
 
I have one crooked eye brow...the one on the right 
It grew back that way...when I shaved it one night
 
The wrinkles in my eyes...are spread like a bare tree 
As for hair, I've got some...and that's cool by me
 
The bridge on my nose...and to your accord 
Looks like to me...to be straight as a board
 
Twas a hole in my left ear...now fully closed 
Back when, I wore an earring...when I wore wholly clothes
 
My chin swiveled slightly...'cause I'm chewing on gum 
In the depth of my cleft...there's a scratch from my thumb
 
A rough scruffy face...from a two day old beard 
WHAT! There's a tag on my neck...now that's a bit weird
 
I just noticed it now...while observing my cleft 
It's sticking out below it...an inch to the left
 
There's a scar on my lip...below my mustache 
That I got while fishing...an accidental knife slash
 
My face as a whole...narrow, and thin
Been out in the rays...got a tan on my skin
 
Ugly, I am, nah...but some might think so 
Their heads must be big...eh, what do they know
 
Handsome, am I...not to sound bold 
A good looking man, from my wives...I've been told
 
The whites in my eyes...all blood shot and red 
From staying up late writing...when I should be in bed
 
Good-Night!

 
Okay, this isn't completely true. The photo wasn't from my book, it's me now. I don't have one crooked eyebrow, I have two. I'm NOT cool with having just SOME hair. The bridge on my nose is slightly crooked. The hole in my ear is on my right side, my chin is swiveling, but not from chewing gum. I have no cleft, the scar on my lip was no accident. I have no tan, it's winter. I am not ugly, I am handsome (lol) My eyes are blood shot, but not from being tired. And it's 8:00 I'll be up for hours. 
Besides that, everything else is one hundred percent true! 

The Metaphor Of Your Face Poetry Contest 
Sponsor: John Lawless 
11-22-2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Capitano Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 7:41 AM
If I were a blind man, your descriptions would give me sight. A delightful piece with humour and insight. Well done.
Proxenos Avatar
November 29, 2019 at 1:26 PM
Your face sounds just great to me Charlie - you sound like a handsome cowboy from the movies! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Wolf Avatar
November 28, 2019 at 2:08 PM
Now that last couplet's just great, Charlie! Enjoyed this fun tour of your face, my friend! Good luck in the contest. Season's best, Gershon
Williams Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 3:19 AM
So long as you've got a sense of humour, and I know you have, everything else is incidental Charlie. A well written poem, good luck in the contest....Maria Hugs
Messina Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 6:00 AM
One needs to have a sense a humour, especially in today's world. Thank you so much Maria.. Hugs Charlie
Blodgett Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 10:04 PM
What fun you have!! Love to read this. Lonna
Messina Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 6:02 AM
So glad you enjoyed my somewhat true fun write (lol) Thanks for the visit Lonna :) Hugs Charlie
Foster Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 1:33 PM
hehe... wives.. you busy guy... you... wonderful fun. Enjoyed your poem. Ann
Messina Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 6:03 AM
LOL.. Yes, I've been divorced (twice) Thanks Ann. Hugs Charlie
Adams Avatar
November 23, 2019 at 9:56 PM
lol this was great Charlie...it matters not what's on the outside, the inside shows a beautiful soul... enjoyed this one...best wishes in the contest... hugs
Messina Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 6:05 AM
Hi Sandra, such a charming compliment. Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed my sense of humour :) Hugs Charlie
Laurie Avatar
November 23, 2019 at 7:12 PM
G'day Charles … now this one humorous delightful verse. Certainly brought a grin to my face - thanks Charles - Lindsay
Messina Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 6:06 AM
G'day Lindsay, whenever I can bring a grin to one's face with a few simple words.. well, it makes me grin a too! ~Charlie
One Avatar
November 23, 2019 at 7:35 AM
love it.. great for this contest.. i know you look nothing like that... haha.
Messina Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 6:07 AM
Yes, I know you know that..lol Thanks so much Silent One :) CM
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