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Good Night Face

Let me describe to you...my face, how I look Taken from my photo...on the face of my book I have one crooked eye brow...the one on the right It grew back that way...when I shaved it one night The wrinkles in my eyes...are spread like a bare tree As for hair, I've got some...and that's cool by me The bridge on my nose...and to your accord Looks like to me...to be straight as a board Twas a hole in my left ear...now fully closed Back when, I wore an earring...when I wore wholly clothes My chin swiveled slightly...'cause I'm chewing on gum In the depth of my cleft...there's a scratch from my thumb A rough scruffy face...from a two day old beard WHAT! There's a tag on my neck...now that's a bit weird I just noticed it now...while observing my cleft It's sticking out below it...an inch to the left There's a scar on my lip...below my mustache That I got while fishing...an accidental knife slash My face as a whole...narrow, and thin Been out in the rays...got a tan on my skin Ugly, I am, nah...but some might think so Their heads must be big...eh, what do they know Handsome, am I...not to sound bold A good looking man, from my wives...I've been told The whites in my eyes...all blood shot and red From staying up late writing...when I should be in bed Good-Night! Okay, this isn't completely true. The photo wasn't from my book, it's me now. I don't have one crooked eyebrow, I have two. I'm NOT cool with having just SOME hair. The bridge on my nose is slightly crooked. The hole in my ear is on my right side, my chin is swiveling, but not from chewing gum. I have no cleft, the scar on my lip was no accident. I have no tan, it's winter. I am not ugly, I am handsome (lol) My eyes are blood shot, but not from being tired. And it's 8:00 I'll be up for hours. Besides that, everything else is one hundred percent true! The Metaphor Of Your Face Poetry Contest Sponsor: John Lawless 11-22-2019

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Date: 12/3/2019 7:41:00 AM
If I were a blind man, your descriptions would give me sight. A delightful piece with humour and insight. Well done.
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Date: 11/29/2019 1:26:00 PM
Your face sounds just great to me Charlie - you sound like a handsome cowboy from the movies! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 11/28/2019 2:08:00 PM
Now that last couplet's just great, Charlie! Enjoyed this fun tour of your face, my friend! Good luck in the contest. Season's best, Gershon
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Date: 11/27/2019 9:18:00 PM
You don't have much of a sense of humor do you Charlie? lol This is fun, I love to laugh and that I did. Thank you, Charlie. Good luck!
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Date: 11/25/2019 3:19:00 AM
So long as you've got a sense of humour, and I know you have, everything else is incidental Charlie. A well written poem, good luck in the contest....Maria Hugs
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Charles Messina
Date: 11/25/2019 6:00:00 AM
One needs to have a sense a humour, especially in today's world. Thank you so much Maria.. Hugs Charlie
Date: 11/24/2019 10:04:00 PM
What fun you have!! Love to read this. Lonna
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Charles Messina
Date: 11/25/2019 6:02:00 AM
So glad you enjoyed my somewhat true fun write (lol) Thanks for the visit Lonna :) Hugs Charlie
Date: 11/24/2019 1:33:00 PM
hehe... wives.. you busy guy... you... wonderful fun. Enjoyed your poem. Ann
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Charles Messina
Date: 11/25/2019 6:03:00 AM
LOL.. Yes, I've been divorced (twice) Thanks Ann. Hugs Charlie
Date: 11/23/2019 9:56:00 PM
lol this was great Charlie...it matters not what's on the outside, the inside shows a beautiful soul... enjoyed this one...best wishes in the contest... hugs
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Charles Messina
Date: 11/25/2019 6:05:00 AM
Hi Sandra, such a charming compliment. Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed my sense of humour :) Hugs Charlie
Date: 11/23/2019 7:12:00 PM
G'day Charles … now this one humorous delightful verse. Certainly brought a grin to my face - thanks Charles - Lindsay
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Charles Messina
Date: 11/25/2019 6:06:00 AM
G'day Lindsay, whenever I can bring a grin to one's face with a few simple words.. well, it makes me grin a too! ~Charlie
Date: 11/23/2019 7:35:00 AM
love it.. great for this contest.. i know you look nothing like that... haha.
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Charles Messina
Date: 11/25/2019 6:07:00 AM
Yes, I know you know that..lol Thanks so much Silent One :) CM

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