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Good Mother

A sun amongst dark stars in the blue sky,
A rose in the forest of wild flowers,
Her benevolence makes men not to cry,
Her tantalizing love falls like showers,
Mind and patience taller than many towers.


*Dedicated to all good mothers in the world especially my poetry soup friends which 
include Debbie,Gwendolen,Catie,PD,Carol, Andrea,Joann,Sara,Kim,Mandy,Rhonda,Linda-Marie,Crous,
Nette,Cyndi,Susan,Vicky,Anne lise, Gail, Modupe,Leonora,Maria,Constance,Yesha,
Joyce,ETC -to mention but a few.
Wishing you Merry Xmas as you celebrate with you kids and grand kids.

CONTEST:"Any five line  poem" sponsored by Rick Parise.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/11/2013 7:12:00 PM
Awwwwwwwwww well a good MAN has many good Ma's!!! Congrad's on your win. Light & love
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Date: 8/11/2013 12:35:00 AM
My hearty congratulations on your win my dear friend Olusegun. Thank you so much as well for sharing your excellent write. Have a grace-filled wkend! Love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 8/9/2013 7:30:00 PM
awesome......... SKAT
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Date: 8/8/2013 9:21:00 PM
Olusegun. CONGRATULATIONS!!! With your awesome good poem' in Nathan's contest... Linda
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Date: 8/8/2013 8:17:00 PM
awesome poem :-)
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Date: 6/19/2013 4:19:00 PM
A lovely tribute to your mother, Olusegun! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/17/2013 10:59:00 AM
What a lovely, and generous sentiment declaration. As a mother, you make me feel proud to play such an important role in my own life. A pleasure to read this beautiful dedication. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/16/2013 2:18:00 PM
Lovely Thought~Sweet words!!Great Tribute !!!CONGRATS TO YOU!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 1/8/2013 1:13:00 AM
Your mother is a very happy woman because you appreciate her love.
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Date: 12/24/2012 5:31:00 AM
Good morning, Olusegun,, A nice warm congratulations for the very nice win in Rick's "Any 5 Line Poem" Wishing you the best holidays to come. Merry Christmas and a happy new year. Love~LINDA
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Date: 12/23/2012 6:14:00 PM
REads like a winner..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for including me in your list..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 12/23/2012 1:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning spot my friend xx
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Date: 12/23/2012 6:12:00 AM
this is a wonderful dedication.. have a wonderful merry xmas yourself and to your family...
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Date: 12/22/2012 5:30:00 PM
also I am going thru winners list now and seeing you are ON this one with this poem I had just viewed. BIG congrats with your win.
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Date: 12/22/2012 5:16:00 PM
wow, it's like mother's day and christmas rolled into one. thanks for this sweet poem, Olusegun. I wish you a merry Xmas as well.
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Date: 12/22/2012 3:13:00 PM
Olusegun...I think I shall cry...when a young man points out the finer attributes of a woman it makes my heart glad. One day when u begin your family, I will return the favor by writing of the GOOD FATHER!!! A holy hug to u, friend. Thinking of u and your family across the way this Christmas season! All smiles here!!
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Date: 12/22/2012 7:16:00 AM
Lovely poem Arowolo! Beautiful dedication! The world is indeed in need of strong women, and mothers are the strongest of them all. Nice!
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