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Good Morning Heartache

9/3/2023 Remembering, that morning, you were gone. Your etched coffee mug, on the plaid kitchen table cloth. And your loving presence vanished, like the morning fog. How deeply sad, that utterly heartbreaking and fateful morn. Who would have thought a new love of my lfe was headed my way? Not m…..who was drowning in forlorn loneliness! How does life work out…I pondered, bu it .simply does! Is it perhaps…some invisible angelic presence? I feel those exact, same emotions today. But I know now, the seasons of the here, has its ways! And today’s unbearable heaviness ,will be gone, Replaced by etches, glorious sprit songs! Through this silvered mist, dream helpers, work on the spirit of my dreams. So, I let it all go~ drifting in new dreams,in fine,poetic, serene repose Neither form, nor impressive verbiage, creates my poetrt Happiest am I, exposing the genuine me, still in search of my own style! Those genuine sounds, the soft echoes of my velvet, throbbing soul. When I compose the genuine melody, it’s a miraculous wave! And makes my days truly delicious, something to share. To smile, dance in, and nary a heartach to behold.

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Date: 9/7/2023 7:20:00 AM
A lovely write/story. Life is filled with good/bad. Keep Smiling... Have a great/blessed day writing away...............
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Date: 9/4/2023 5:40:00 PM
Enjoy reading your journey in poetry as you find your style. Love how you write 'how life works out'...simply does! Wisdom is at the fore on the Soup!
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/4/2023 8:38:00 PM
Good Evening David! I wish I could list the horrendous life situations I experienced in life… the stuff, one finds in novels! With the thousands of poets, here, absolutely there is emotional angst and physical pain.dysfunctional families and relationships ,booze and drug users, too. That’s what I know is here,covered over with cuteness? Jokes? When will humans face reality and have the guts to rise above butterflies! I do know people can overcome ..they amaze me. It works out, yes, when we really are who we are. The challenge in poetry is …if a poet values humanity or his/her own self aggrandizement more!I am only at the threshold of writing. I want more wisdom at the fore. Freedom does not work out. We are on the threshold of giving up all our liberties in the USA. No freedom. No poetry.That takes courage" merci, Pangie
Date: 9/4/2023 9:53:00 AM
Hi Pangie, this has all the petals of a great poem with your ever present bedrock of truth and honesty. Anthony
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/4/2023 11:26:00 AM
Well, Anthony, I totally agree with you, it's one of my best ever! Thank you for the grand recognition I like your saying, All the petals of a great poem. How very sweet. Pangie xx
Date: 9/4/2023 8:04:00 AM
Heartfelt:)
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/4/2023 11:20:00 AM
Agreed)))

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