Good Morning

It is the beginning of the day 
The cock crows 
The cool breeze blows 
Toads and crickets retire to their homes 
As birds start to sing sweet melodies above. 

The earth is wet from the midnight dew 
The cloud all white reforming its blue 
All plants arise for the sun to shine 
Breakfast bennnnn ready for us to dine. 

Bright and brighter 
The day gets better 
What tells the atmosphere? 
It signals that the sun is near.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 4/22/2017 1:25:00 PM
Good afternoon Victory this is a beautiful poem. I gave you a 7
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Date: 4/30/2012 1:39:00 AM
GOOD MORNING TO YOU TO, HAVE A LOVELY DAY IN SUNSHINE AND LOVE !!! Well written poem Victory. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 4/27/2012 3:02:00 PM
hi,its nice stopping by to read your poem..welcome to poetry....hope you find it exciting here like i did
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Date: 4/27/2012 11:41:00 AM
A lovely refreshing write Victory!!! Makes me feel to take a deep breath and just breathe in the morning!!... Thank you for sharing this... Love Diana
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Date: 4/27/2012 6:47:00 AM
not sure how this is an ABC poem, I really like the first verse, I'm not at all convinced by the third, keep writing.
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Date: 4/27/2012 8:09:00 AM
My bad! Mistake corrected. And hey, thanks for the analysis.
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