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Good Luck, Uncle Jack!

put a penny on the track, Uncle Jack!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/17/2009 11:27:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest Jim.Rgds Brian
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Date: 7/17/2009 10:05:00 PM
This is a fun Monoku, Jim, I enjoyed it. Thank you for your comments also, age of innocence is right, wasn't long till all hell broke loose! LOL Thanks again! ~Trudy~
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Date: 7/17/2009 9:11:00 PM
cute and illegal,,,Just kidding,,,great monoku,,good luck in the contest,,and Thank you for reading mine and commenting,,blessings..Cecil
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Date: 7/16/2009 12:28:00 PM
The form is new to me! Someone once wrote into a magazine I write for that he and his friends used to put pennies on trolley tracks just to see them bend out of shape. Thanks for your comments! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 7/15/2009 2:33:00 PM
Love your Monoku James. Sara
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Date: 7/15/2009 7:40:00 AM
I reckon it would get smashed huh - interesting concept - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 7/14/2009 6:36:00 PM
Good one brother Jim..best wishes.
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Date: 7/14/2009 6:36:00 PM
Hummm, risky, adventurous, daring, rougish even. does he? in huge question marks? or...will he de-rail the idea? :))-AA
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Date: 7/14/2009 8:04:00 AM
Clever use of this form, ... hope it brings you luck !!!
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Date: 7/14/2009 5:09:00 AM
Looks like it wasn't hard for you to conquer this form James. Awesome. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/14/2009 1:35:00 AM
Nice work Jim.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today
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