Good Luck, Uncle Jack!

put a penny on the track, Uncle Jack!
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Strand Avatar
July 17, 2009 at 11:27 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest Jim.Rgds Brian
Rider Avatar
July 17, 2009 at 10:05 PM
This is a fun Monoku, Jim, I enjoyed it. Thank you for your comments also, age of innocence is right, wasn't long till all hell broke loose! LOL Thanks again! ~Trudy~
Hickman Avatar
July 17, 2009 at 9:11 PM
cute and illegal,,,Just kidding,,,great monoku,,good luck in the contest,,and Thank you for reading mine and commenting,,blessings..Cecil
Anish Avatar
July 16, 2009 at 12:28 PM
The form is new to me! Someone once wrote into a magazine I write for that he and his friends used to put pennies on trolley tracks just to see them bend out of shape. Thanks for your comments! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Kendrick Avatar
July 15, 2009 at 2:33 PM
Love your Monoku James. Sara
Jordan Avatar
July 15, 2009 at 7:40 AM
I reckon it would get smashed huh - interesting concept - God Bless, MJ
Higgins Avatar
July 14, 2009 at 6:36 PM
Good one brother Jim..best wishes.
Hudson Avatar
July 14, 2009 at 6:36 PM
Hummm, risky, adventurous, daring, rougish even. does he? in huge question marks? or...will he de-rail the idea? :))-AA
Richards Avatar
July 14, 2009 at 8:04 AM
Clever use of this form, ... hope it brings you luck !!!
Brown Avatar
July 14, 2009 at 5:09 AM
Looks like it wasn't hard for you to conquer this form James. Awesome. Love, Carol
Strand Avatar
July 14, 2009 at 1:35 AM
Nice work Jim.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today
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