Good Eggs

I feel like I’m blessed in this life by good eggs
But, of course, on occasion one’s rotten,
A good egg compares to a wine that has legs
The rare bad one is quickly forgotten.

A good egg just seems to slide down oh so nice
While a bad one will stick in your craw,
A good egg may offer some friendly advice
But a bad one will lay down the law.

A good egg departs just as smooth as it came
While a bad one can leave stomach churning,
Good eggs make you feel you’re on top of your game
While the bad make you doubt all your learning.

Yes nature and nurture both count it is true
But if you’re a “good egg,” count me grateful,
Good eggness depends on good choices by you
And it’s lack in the world can be fateful.

There’s really no way to forecast what you get
The “real proof” as they say “in the pudding,”
But luck comes most often to those who won’t quit
And who manage the time spent in brooding.

Long Tooth
July 3, 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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July 5, 2016 at 4:02 PM
Hello Roofless, I've just spent a very enjoyable twenty minutes reading your works and I've picked this one as my favorite - like all good poetry to me it rhymes. If this is your latest I look forward to reading more. Best regards, Dennis
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July 3, 2016 at 9:59 AM
I adore your poem! It is absolutely creative and imagery loaded, so original and fresh. It was my joy to spend time here. Go in a good egg way ... CayCay
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